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My blood is running cold
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My blood is running cold |
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matrixtrinity303 New Member
since 2002-02-07
Posts 4FL, USA |
My blood is running cold Have I lived a thousand lives? Or is this the only one? I'm being torn apart inside Trying too hard to touch the sun The memory of your softest touch Is etched upon my soul But I'm alone in this infernal search To find what makes me whole I thought it was you I thought you felt the same But now I'm alone, a counting coo My head held high but my body maimed The memory of your tender kiss Is burned into my soul My very existence seems pointless now And my blood is running cold. |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Wow, this is true genius, I can't believe the lack of replies *Hey everyone; come read this now* ... this is a beutiful peace of writing - you have written this with so much soul . I know the feeling your describing here only too well . A true work of heart, I loved it . Probbaly a little late, but WELCOME; you have a great talent that I hope you will keep displaying on this site . L.of.L. Tom. XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!! I have been there...quite a bit and you have put it perfectly....I pray your heart again finds the warmth of love flowing into it...Magnificent writing... Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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