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Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-06-13 11:31 PM


The piano plays a symphony
Melodies of love so soft and sweet
Our hearts in tune with one another
As your love sweeps me off my feet

The violin player serenades us
His heartfelt songs are so divine
In the flickering light of the candle
How our love continues to shine

The guitar weeps a song of sadness
For broken hearts in search of love
Forever hoping that someone special
Will send their hearts soaring high above

The mandolin sounds so romantic
Touching our hearts like never before
Consumed within our passion
You twirl me around the dance floor

Your words are music to my ears
You speak of love so very fine
In the stillness of the evening
I hear your heart call out to mine

Our hearts play their own repertoire
We're so in love like never before
Words and music taking us higher
Our feet barely touching the floor

Suetang

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-06-13 11:32 PM


I love music.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Madame Chipmunk
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2 posted 2002-06-13 11:48 PM


Your words are music to my ears
You speak of love so very fine
In the stillness of the evening
I hear your heart call out to mine

these sound like the words of a woman in love, Sue...
They wear the blush of romance so well.

~ hugs for hope

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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3 posted 2002-06-14 12:57 PM


Sue:  A very romantic and lovely poem.

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2002-06-17 10:07 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, you sound so deeply in love, sweet friend, we all wish for this happiness to forever blossom in your heart and bring a choir of angels to recite your affection forever! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-17-2002 10:08 PM).]

Goodknight
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5 posted 2002-06-17 10:25 PM


thanks for the sounds of wonderful romantic music!!!
Magnus
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6 posted 2002-06-17 10:33 PM


May I have the next dance...

Very beautiful Sue....like the use of the
various instruments...nicely done.

Bridget Shenachie
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7 posted 2002-06-17 10:56 PM


Music to our ears from your heart.  Thanks, Sue.  Love the romance in your soul.

Shenachie

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