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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee 
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I tear at thought’s splendid pity and decide my eyes need watering This ache feels deep like bone rap and I suppose those words sanctify me, make me feel a part of air and water Those mimed words make for better listening like a sub woofer inside my soul frequency Pounding..evolving out across my expression I happen to like suffering from whipped notions There is no shame in the first known emotion Like it was normal to be new, naked, all alone I love the wind speak and trees and everything that I run to you for far above this day clatter falling like scissored braids and lime ribbon I am woman and I miss you |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
One of the freshest fruits in the garden. Beautiful write. ThisDiamond |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
All I can say is beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I love the wind speak and trees and everything that I run to you for far above this day clatter falling like scissored braids and lime ribbon I am woman and I miss you This just tears at me, Reg. I sat here for 10 minutes, reading this poem over and over again...trying to figure out why it hit me so hard...and then I realized that next week would have been my 37th wedding anniversary with my late first husband... and although I am married now, to the world's most wonderful man.... I am woman and I miss him  ~ loving hugs and thank you for sharing this with usLyra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I love the wind speak and trees and everything that I run to you for far above this day clatter falling like scissored braids and lime ribbon I am woman and I miss you -------------------------------------------- Exquisite Regina...absolutely exquisite!! ~Hugs~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I miss you too he would say with smile eyes lovely work Regina [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (06-16-2002 08:45 AM).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wow! You sure am woman! Love the satirical caste of this in places.....very well written..... "like a sub woofer inside my soul frequency Pounding..evolving out across my expression " He he those lines knock me over! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RWood~ Such delicately laced emote~ Nice to read such beauty~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
rwood, That's about as straight as it gets. Wonderful read. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
There is not doubt you are woman and a fine poet  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Indeed you are a woman dear, and yes.......the ache of missing is sooooooo hard......I know it well. Hugs somy~ I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
"I happen to like suffering from whipped notions" this line stood out for too many reasons. . . I wonder just how many of us have "whipped notions" sitting in our refrigerators?? excellent work Reg. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Wow...you certainly displayed the mood well within your words....and the ending tied it all together with such powerful effect and yearning....and you referred to me as "sensual steam".... Hmmmmm...mayhaps you are the fire beneath the kettle... waiting for the boil to start...I think so! |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Very sensual and thought-provoking. Nicely written you! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I've always read you, and don't know why I haven't said anything till now, but this one is good, hits home. Please keep on sharing even if some of us don't type anything in the space, just know that you are read and admired. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Regina, this is sooooooo beautiful, you are a wonderful woman and a wonderful friend and poet to us all! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
ThisDiamond: Thank you poet friend. I believe you know exactly which garden my mind was in. the_loner: Your words are beautiful to me, thank you. Lyra: Yes sweet lady. You always will. I am both sorry and so thankful to connect with you in that light. I appreciate you and hope you find your smile today for so many now reasons. Warm hug thanks. Nancy: To know you think so is exquisite. thanks millions. Dark: Yes..and yes... There is room here. Better bring an everynite bag? Thank you D. ethome: Glad you felt that stanza the way I meant it. Hugs to you! Marge: You give great word hugs. Thanks for you. Sy: Yes..i thought so. Thank you hugs.. Bob: Thank you so much for that. Appreciate you deeply. Donna: Thanks for connecting there. Hug you somy~ Sven: LOL! Well..my whipped notion is more than a can o fluff..more than I care to admit. giggle..thank you Svenpen. Magnus: Oooo you make me sound like a witchy woman..lol! Thank you hugs. RSEvans: So happy you stopped in. Thanks for you. passing shadows: You encourage my spirit poetess. I hope I will aways find a way to share my existence if even for other spirits such as yourself. Thank you hugs.. Noah: Hey darlin'! Hope you always smile like that..thanks for you. Love and hugs. Sincerely, Reg |
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