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sigheyes
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since 2001-04-25
Posts 323
the winds of destiny

0 posted 2002-06-13 10:24 PM


Life does not prevail
when  seeking the pot of gold
trampling dreams of youth.

Tread soft upon the path
righteousness prevailing all
who seek it's wisdom.


© Copyright 2002 sigheyes - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2002-06-13 10:28 PM


Amen Lady, you said so much with so few words.  Great senryu

I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth)


Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2002-06-13 10:30 PM


...BEAUTIFUL!!...

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
3 posted 2002-06-13 10:31 PM


Awesome!!!!!!!!!!

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
4 posted 2002-06-13 10:58 PM


A perfect thought in pretty clothes. ThisDiamond
Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
5 posted 2002-06-13 11:56 PM


A lot said with so few words, Sigh...
and beautifully done, indeed!

~ poetic hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state
6 posted 2002-06-14 12:15 PM


inspirational..and concise


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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-09-09
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In Your Poetic Mind
7 posted 2002-06-14 12:59 PM


lovely words..


Lauren~

Its been a long road
Getting from there to here
Ive known a wind so cold, seen the darkest days
but now the winds I feel are only winds of change

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