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Apricot Morning
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Apricot Morning |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Apricot Morning ~*Marge Tindal*~  Out across the break of morn an apricot sky in glowing adorn rose upon my serenity with just a tinge of 'wait for me'~ Shedding gentle shafts of light she had gathered through the night Sharing the shades of her palette hues as she came swiftly into my view~ Soft the touch of gentle sun when upon a morn begun lays in colors resplendently spread across the woodsey forest beds~ Ah, tis beauty beyond the word of poets waiting to be heard She pirouettes in fervored dancing then out across the meadow goes prancing~ That she would come to flavor my morn with apricot hues of mellowing adorn affirms to me that it's awfully nice to rise before the cock crows thrice~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Those cotton pickin' roosters....they never are on time so that we can see those apricot morns..... Love the pic, so fitting... You made hungry for apricots......and sunrises... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Margie girl! This is spectacular! AND the picture....oh so very special! Wonderful...thank you for this beauty! ~Hugs~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
So very enchanting, Marge... I should probably get up earlier...I always miss sunrise because I don't do mornings...but you have given me a reason to wake up early now. Thank you!  ~ morning hugsLyra |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Love the picture. Love the description. Love the whole poem. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
beautiful sunrise thoughts Marge, lovely picture. Hugssss I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth) |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: The early bird catches the best sunrises of all! This is gorgeous, both poem and picture. Betty Lou Hebert |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful picture and superb words of description. Have a rosy nice day Marge.....What a beautiful start! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Friends~ I thank each of you for letting me share the beauty of the morning sunrise~ I appreciate the kindness of your comments. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Nancy Lee said it ... SPECTACULAR! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed Marge...James |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, And there were you in the middle of it all, how lovely.  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ah, tis beauty beyond the word of poets waiting to be heard Make that MOST poets, dear lady... for while describing a sunrise adequately is beyond most of us, you've painted a picture with your pen that rivals what the camera captured. *S* Absolutely beautiful!!! *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ You are a dear ... ya' know ?  JamesMichael~ Thanks sweetie~ Seymour~ Ahhhhh ... indeed I was~ Such a gift of the dawn~ SweetSuthernGal~ You *hug* my heart~ Thank you dearest lady~ *Hugs* right back to you all~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- Yep...just as I thought. You still pen the sunrise like no other.  Love you~  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
superb write Margie really very visual and enjoyable and I loved the pic...well done and thanks for sharing with us.~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Not sure which is better...the poet, or the gift she found.... perhaps it is just a marriage made right.... |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
What a wonderful poem to wake up with... and not only in the morning... Love Light and happiness! Neeraja |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Marge, you do these sunrises so well. This is so beautiful. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge You make gorgeous even more so. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I think it is perfect to reply to this poem twice....I enjoyed it immensely both times. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Ah, tis beauty beyond the word of poets waiting to be heard She pirouettes in fervored dancing then out across the meadow goes prancing~ ====================================== This verse alone captures the beauty in it's own right but tie it together with your entire piece and you have a beautiful start to any day. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Hi gal ... I love knowing you found my 'sunrise' appealing~ Tracie~ Thank you, hon ... glad to share a sunrise with you anytime~ SoleilNoir~ What a lovely thing to say ... thank you~ Neeraja~ Thank you so very much~ SweetSuzieQ~ Thanks hon .... you're a sweetie~ MartieSis~ Awwww ... you just made me feel a bit better~ Magnus~ Thank you for 'double-dipping'~ I appreciate it~ MarkB~ You are such a dear to come share a sunrise~ Thanks sweetie ... Gv ge yuhi~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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