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Menu Of A Rainy Day
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Menu Of A Rainy Day |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Beyond the plain among the trees of high Rolling thunder pushing winds Flowing, caressing the limbs as pine nettles swirl and fall Eastward, golden rays mingling flirting with gray as flashes of electric fingers tickle the sun’s rays The heavens laugh Alone would bring fear Yet the sanctuary of closeness, the warmth consoles and assures as eyes squint against the wind. Rains will cause the scurry to shelter. The slamming of doors, swish of windows Lover’s rain The soft gentle patter of tiny feet soothing to the ears, spurring sensual thoughts. The once slow beat of two hearts hammering in an echo.. Soft skin brushes fingers trace... A lover’s game Best kept for this moment as thunder rolls and skies cry Whispers betray moments of stillness Lovers sigh... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lover’s rain The soft gentle patter of tiny feet soothing to the ears, spurring sensual thoughts. The once slow beat of two hearts hammering in an echo.. Soft skin brushes fingers trace... A lover’s game Best kept for this moment as thunder rolls and skies cry Whispers betray moments of stillness Lovers sigh... ------------------------------------- Oh Barry!! If you only knew...if you only knew the feelings this piece pulled from me... OH WOW!! Now this is your very BEST..EVER!! Amazing write...and I love it of course! Softly builds to a sensual crescendo! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
SEEEEEE....I got you to change your silly mind again....Something tells me that this will happen again...hopefully soon... HUGS Nancy....you crazy woman....you are a treat.... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Magnus I like the items at the end of the menu here.....sensual and perceptive write...... Things to do on a rainy day...whew boy good! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
ET....Yep, a soft rain is the perfect music for love on what could otherwise be a dreary day... THANX! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sorry...forgot to click the library thingy  |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Yet the sanctuary of closeness, the warmth consoles and assures I absolutely adored this poem, Barry... I think your poem captured the storm perfectly...and I also love rainy days...even cloudy ones, much better than sunny ones.  ~ rainy hugsLyra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Other than a spring morning, fresh and cool. It is hard to beat a day of soft rain falling on your ears...with someone you love nearby...to share the moment... Until I start thinking...and wondering if I could go fishing that day???? Thanx Lyra... |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
A very interesting menu indeed---of weather & togetherness, and the making the most of the stormy and still times of life. Very Good! david |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Excellent. Your writing just gets better and better. Cor |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry Yet again I am left speechless by the intense beauty and romance portayed through your masterful words. Stunning images from a master craftsman. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Been raining here all day...perfect menu, Barry! Forgetting all I'm lacking |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Barry~ YES now I know why I am so drawn to your words...  Lauren~ Its been a long road |
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bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
Very eloquent and perceptive write. I really enjoyed. Now I know what to do this weekend when it rains--AGAIN! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* romantically beautiful....a lucky lady inspires your heart.... Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Barry, this is sooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, it always seems no matter what the weather forecast would report, a smile is always contagious and make even every rainy day and Monday look like a may day! (big hugggssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Well, this could almost make me see the 90% rain while I was at the beach as a good thing. Sandra |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
The rain holds many things .... now a few more! It never seems to amaze me how one's fears is another one's pleasures. Good write my friend. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed this Magnus...James |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Whispers and rain make for a romantic menu sir... enjoyed this... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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