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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2002-06-13 05:53 PM


I'm goin' out to bout' with the loud town girl
we'll wear no shoe spats to the backyard shivaree
she'll be bendin' the air on her foot dance toes
and startlin' up to wake the echo folk boys

I'll be her pebblestone man, her chuckie rock roy
but she'll  say I'm a gem of first water, one
she'll leave the sticky smell on night wind buttons
when ol' shawondasee dances her round town

she'll make the eddys swirl in their skin sides
makes the chokedamp panting want more breathe
she gets the reverine magnets in her lady wine
like voodoo rags and bones she gets so naughty bad

she says there ain't  no mornin' for sleepy time
when she gets the dusky night in her window eyes
she'll give me smother valley lovein' songs
will say my young man make her belly tickle fire

when we go spill the zydeco at the rowdy dow now


©Dark

it is all just dancin'
  
  


© Copyright 2002 ©Dark 2k - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-06-13 05:56 PM


Very interesting. I like it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2002-06-13 05:59 PM


Dark Stranger
Thats quite a dance.

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2002-06-13 06:03 PM


lone 23, thanx for the eyes on it, appreciate you


sy, thanks my friend..my other self sneekin out

Martie
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4 posted 2002-06-13 06:29 PM


DS

Where did you say this backyard shivaree was?

Corinne
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state of confusion
5 posted 2002-06-13 07:21 PM


Nice 'n light, good beat, too!

Cor

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2002-06-13 08:34 PM


Can't say when the last shivaree was..
I went to..
must be time for another...
night dancin' can be summer sweat fun.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

rwood
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Tennessee
7 posted 2002-06-13 09:52 PM


file' gumbo ma`ze chop, krio ben walk..king porter stomp baby..raizin baby...

yes..


Sincerely,
Reg

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2002-06-14 12:04 PM


mz martie, is dow' the roa n behind the cyress..thanks lady

cor, thanks for the foot tap wiggle

enchantress..jus' awhile ago, you was there...come on back now..thanks


Regina, we gots to do it dere' swamp song is de bad song we gotta do..thanks babe

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
9 posted 2002-06-16 09:59 AM



This is more than dancing, sir...
this...is living!

wranx
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10 posted 2002-06-16 10:22 AM


This just splendid, yessir, be you coon-ass or no'.

~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

Mistletoe Angel
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11 posted 2002-06-16 12:27 PM




(smiles) Wow, I have missed your words so much, sweet friend, dancing at night must be so fun though I don't get to do it very often because I don't have someone to dance with! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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12 posted 2002-06-16 03:03 PM


what a way to enjoy life Ds, way cool
cuz dat's da way ya gotza do it!

I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth)


Dark Stranger
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13 posted 2002-06-17 10:14 AM


sunshine.....thanks lady fair for the dip in the rowdy dow

wranx, thanks for the review, very much appreciated

noah, bless you my friend for your support

GS, slow hugs lady friend, thanks

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