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The Seeding Cloud
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The Seeding Cloud |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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The Seeding Cloud The very moment I sought it out, long enough to submit to curiosity, to tilt my head up questioning, it swiftly gathered into a face I knew — darkness, seeding, spreading overhead. That emptiness: devoid of tenor, quivering, beyond flesh, aria of the lost; I hoped it was imagined, projected in my own rising panic, anything, anything other than that image — a relay after death, from you. © 2002 C.M. Bailey [This message has been edited by Corinne (06-13-2002 11:05 PM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done, Corinne. Well done, indeed. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
there's a haunting image here that won't let go Corinne. . . great work. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Interloper and Sven! Cor |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
bumping up excellent poetry tonight.. Your work just gets better and better, Lady. How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Excellent read Corinne....I enjoyed! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Corinne, these words sound so very haunting, sweet friend, I hope everything is OK and this vision doesn't apply to you or anyone close to you! (kiss on cheek) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corinne, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Words that just keep on forming images - thanks for a very good read - Paul |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Cor, clouds bring warning of life and death in time we fear some we pray for others enjoyed it ms |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
You have talents that defy definition... and your imagery is pure art... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Corinne...your beautiful poem, gave me the chills! A job well done.  ~ warm chilled hugsLyra |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Hey, thanks Temptress!!! Thank you Ehtome! Noah - as always, your words are sweet, thank you! Thanks Paul! Dark one - thank you for the thoughts, sir! Thanks Decaflame! Madam Chipmunk - thanks! Corinne |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Soooo sooo sweet2read your poetry Corrine... Your writing is exquisite PoetFriend... Smiles2u *~coco*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ Your ink-of-thought often leaves me spell-bound~ This is one of those times~ 'The very moment I sought it out, long enough to submit to curiosity, to tilt my head up questioning, it swiftly gathered into a face I knew — darkness, seeding, spreading overhead. I hoped it was imagined, projected in my own rising panic, anything, anything other than that image — a relay after death, from you.' Absolutely REAL and stunning~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you very much, Coco and Marge! Corinne |
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