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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-06-13 01:53 PM


you can hide the cause
but the effect runs down cheek
disapprobation

Inspired by:Tears


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2002 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
EarthenSoul
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1 posted 2002-06-13 01:57 PM


Perfectly Simple - Simply Perfect
Absolutely beautiful and true!

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2002-06-13 03:23 PM


Interloper~I sit here and shake my head and smile...
YOU poet sir are the master at these!
Enjoyed...ENJOYED!
~Hugs YOU!~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2002-06-13 03:50 PM


ES ~
Balladeer already told me I was simple
Thank you for the wonderful approbation.

Nancy Lee ~
Darlin', my stetson just ain't agonna fit no more

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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The Shores of Alone
4 posted 2002-06-13 05:28 PM


So much said in such a short space. You do that so well.
Sandra

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5 posted 2002-06-13 05:39 PM


InterLoper~
Stunning~

Buy a NEW STETSON .... I agree~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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6 posted 2002-06-13 05:53 PM


Bob darling boy this is as always perfect stunningly simple in its content and so truthful in its intent. The touch of real beauty is certainly reflected in your beautiful words. You have an uncanny ability to stroke my soul with your writing there’s not that many people whom I allow that close to me.

I wish I had your ability to write like this, but since I don’t I shall simply delight in your writing. This is utterly utterly superb writing and of course I love it utterly. Exquisite absolutely perfect writing


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

SEA
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with you
7 posted 2002-06-14 02:25 AM


pretending to smile
proof otherwise escapes me
in shape of teardrop

ethome
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8 posted 2002-06-14 03:58 AM


My approbation of your description of disapprobation is large!
Startime
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9 posted 2002-06-14 11:48 AM


Your talent makes me weep from the joy of reading it...magnificent....

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
10 posted 2002-06-14 01:32 PM


Sandra ~
Thanx.

Marge ~
I already have three ... all different sizes

Marsha ~
The Tall Texan stares at his feet.  The toe of his boot scuffing in the dust.  The nape of his neck red from embarrassment.  "Shux, ma'am," he says, "twern't nuthin'."

SEA ~
Helllllooooooooo, gal   What a beautiful Senryu. It puts mine to shame...
You are soooooooooooooooooo GOOD!

Eric ~
Whoa!  Huge grins here

Karen ~
Shux, ma'am.  Now I am getting red.  I'm speechless....


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (06-14-2002 03:04 PM).]

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11 posted 2002-06-18 11:25 PM




YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we can make a great effort to hide our tears, but the light that reflects our eyes will always reveal what we truly feel! (smiles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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In Your Poetic Mind
12 posted 2002-06-19 01:11 AM


you know I love how you do these.....   with your classic style!
Lauren~

Its been a long road
Getting from there to here
Ive known a wind so cold, seen the darkest days
but now the winds I feel are only winds of change

Soleil Noir
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13 posted 2002-06-19 09:52 AM



Enchantress is right, you ARE
the Master of Haiku and Senryu
and the others are only followers...

Toerag
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Ala bam a
14 posted 2002-06-19 10:47 AM



Short but sweet
Like Hors D'oeuvres
Little piece of cheese
Little piece of meat.

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