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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2002-06-13 09:53 AM

Nothing but a hazardous waste
that's all our love has come to be
trashed lives in landfill made of dust
all that remains since you left me.

So sorry is this state of things
a love once fine, now barren place
how emtpy two hearts have become
our love now gone without a trace.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2002-06-13 10:11 AM

ms moon...
sometimes
we just have to move on
to keep the pain from ruinin
futures

enjoyed the way you did this

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2002-06-13 10:16 AM

Sandra~

I feel your emotion in this, very strong....sorry you are going through this....

cheer up pretty lady, life and love have a purpose, you will find it....

hugsssss

Lauren~

Its been a long road
Getting from there to here
Ive known a wind so cold, seen the darkest days
but now the winds I feel are only winds of change

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-06-13 10:31 AM

catalinamoon
C'est la vive Not sure of the spelling. Enjoyed the write.

baerlon
Member

since 2000-01-14

Posts 197
Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA

4 posted 2002-06-13 12:30 PM

I love this. I have the same feelings, and last night did not help when i ran into the ex with my replacement. thx for sharing.

There's a peace inside us all
Let it be your friend
It will help you carry on
In the end
There's a peace inside us all
-Creed

TeaBag
Junior Member

since 2002-06-13

Posts 10
Land of Love

5 posted 2002-06-13 12:39 PM

this was a sad but sweet poem. Thanks for sharing how you felt with us. Time will help heal all wounds.. even wounds of the heart, someday.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2002-06-13 01:46 PM

Now you can turn around and walk away, Sandra

I loved the piece ... short and very much to the point!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

7 posted 2002-06-13 01:54 PM

Oh Sandra, this is so sad! I am so sorry this has happened to you.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-06-13 03:17 PM

Gee Sandra...wish there were something I could do or say to help.
Good write though!
How about a hug sweetie.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

9 posted 2002-06-13 03:33 PM

Believe me, Sandra...things can change in the blink of an eye. You'll love, you'll live...again.

Forgetting all I'm lacking
Completely and complete
I'll take your invitation
You take all of me

Lifehouse

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2002-06-13 03:58 PM

The seeds of love still live in your heart.
I hope you can find someone that is sincere and shares your desires...James

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

11 posted 2002-06-14 11:51 AM

Have faith, dear one...if a star can find a man who loves who she is so can you...someday the magic will find you when you least expect it...hugs...

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

12 posted 2002-06-14 11:56 AM

Methinks there's a little trace of that love left there....cause it aches so much in these well penned words!!
Pained write Cat Moon......very good though!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

13 posted 2002-06-14 07:27 PM

I have always said that lust is instant
while love is not so quick...and true
love is like wine aging....it must be
aged properly before it will be the
right wine for you...

Prepare thy glass, time shall bring the
bottle when true love arrives...

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

14 posted 2002-06-14 07:30 PM

Barry, the glass is so polished and ready to go, its not funny.

S

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

15 posted 2002-06-14 10:22 PM

A sad, sweet, lovely poem, Sandra...

Maybe you should dirty the glass a bit...
Love happens when you least expect it.

~ comforting hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

16 posted 2002-06-14 10:23 PM

Sandra...dear lady...I do truly know...

Hugs...big hugs...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

17 posted 2002-06-16 03:57 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sandra, this is so very sad, sweet friend, I wish there was something I could do to help, but to try and cheer you up, I visited Catalina Island last week and I LOVE that place and you inspired me to write some pretty poes I'll post soon! (kiss on cheek) This is sad but powerful, sweet friend, my thoughts are with you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

18 posted 2002-06-16 04:13 PM

hugsssss
too much alike are we....*s

M

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

19 posted 2002-06-16 05:54 PM

enjoyed

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

20 posted 2002-06-16 07:54 PM

Sweetie, your own words will help you to heal, and when you find the right wine it surely will be pure vintage~ I am sure. Hugs to you, you know how to reach me if you need.

I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth)

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