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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast

0 posted 2002-06-13 09:16 AM


old boats,
odd shaped corks
bobbing in the bay
making seal noises
against old tires

clouds with colds
hover over head
nose drip rain
just enough
to spot the glasses

breeze people
walk in from the water
invisible 'til they touch
and mess your hair
as they leave

light bulb with nerve
stands nude there
by the shed
reaching between the limbs
of a monterey pine

tug boat belly growl
duck swim trolling
by the beer hall
spits up its jonah
'til monday morning

wrinkle man in a blanket
with holes for head and arms
rolling his own
stagger dancing
with the lady sea  

mercedes riders run
through puddles
children on a mission
needing a fun fix
waving money with both hands

seagull stops to read
daily news
by a trash barrel mouth
someone had fish & chips
fresh from binky bay

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2002-06-13 10:26 AM


Dark Stranger
This is an epoppe of your style. Enjoyed

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2002-06-13 11:11 AM


My how I love watching
the world
thru your eyes, Dark.
Good stuff!
~Morning Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2002-06-13 11:45 AM


sy, thanks my friend for the wave.

enchantress, you always bless me
would be lonely without your touch

HopeS
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Perth Western Australia
4 posted 2002-06-13 12:04 PM


Hey D.S what can I say
I enjoyed my stroll along the bay
these images I often see
but you write them so good
in your poetry
Hope

Martie
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5 posted 2002-06-13 12:05 PM


DS

The images in this are outstanding, fresh and original.  Really enjoyed reading it!

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2002-06-13 12:26 PM


Hope..
was looking through your eyes ms...thanks for the thoughts in reply

ms Martie, thanks for reading along, hope you didn't get splinters in your feet..you are welcome anytime ms

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2002-06-16 05:08 PM


quote:

light bulb with nerve
stands nude there
by the shed
reaching between the limbs
of a monterey pine

tug boat belly growl
duck swim trolling
by the beer hall
spits up its jonah
'til monday morning


for some reason, this touched a recollect...

Mistletoe Angel
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8 posted 2002-06-16 05:12 PM


"mercedes riders run
through puddles
children on a mission
needing a fun fix
waving money with both hands

seagull stops to read
daily news
by a trash barrel mouth
someone had fish & chips
fresh from binky bay"




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...I just love this vision as I love all your visions, sweet friend, I was lucky to see much of the Californian oceanside last week, it is wonderful and it too made me hungry for fish and chips! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
9 posted 2002-06-17 10:09 AM


sunshine, bless you lady friend for the eye touches


noah, thanks my friend for the reviews, glad you liked it

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