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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Dressed for the salty breeze In a Navy blue wind breaker My vessel and thoughts and we Shall set our hand And souls together Upon the rolling sea Away beyond The edge of the West Where all of the distance rhymes With only the sunlighted day And the moon-mirrored night Pondering the tides and times [This message has been edited by Toerag (06-13-2002 07:56 AM).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
If that's an invitation, I accept! LOL If it was issued to someone else, that's okay... by the time I finish swinging my baseball bat, they'll be indisposed and unable to go... and I'll be glad to substitute. *G* This is absolutely beautiful, Toe... the werk monster is gonna have to strain to yank my thoughts back to the office... for your poem set them free to dream. *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OkayToeMan~ You are penning some mighty fine poetry !! Lovely thoughts for my morning~ HiSuthernGal~ Ducking here ~  Tee-Hee-Hee ! Get back to werk ! *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
But... but... MARGE???? Werk would disrupt this great mood I'm in... and waste the work of dear Toe's pen? Can't let that happen... just tisn't right... 'Course I'll change my tune when the boss walks in sight. *G* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SuthernGal~ You keep ducking the werk monster ... he's gonna send you to the 'cleaners'~  Need a little 'Injun' to watch your back and pick up your slack ? *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toe, You talking in your sleep again? Enjoyed |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Toe darling boy this is exquisite writing, your pen is perfectly poetical and I really do love it. The line and flow of this is excellent. Suthern can’t I borrow him for a little cruise Hmm? I’d send him back practically unmolested honestly Sorry Toe but I can’t take on someone with a baseball bat This really is excellent writing darling boy I love it utterly    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire Thy coolness and they balm Let sense be dumb let flesh retire Speak through the eathquake wind and fire Oh [This message has been edited by Marsha (06-13-2002 01:03 PM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Where do you stow the cat on these nautical excursions ... in the crow's nest?  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I have fallen asleep and awoken in the twilight zone, where Toerag writes beautiful poetry and even uses the word shall! Your talent has never been in question, Toe. It's great to see ya showing what you can do when you take that buffoon hat off...of course, buffoon is a good thing, too!  Nice writing, Mr. Rag. ...and, yes, I saw your adult post..cretin!  Suthern girl, I'll recite this to ya as we watch the fireworks from the deck of Pepper's boat |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gee Toe, I was just going to ask if I could come with you, when I saw the baseball bat in suthern's hand, and thought better of it! This is a wonderful write... Thoroughly enjoyed this one. You do write some serious & beautiful poetry! ~Hugs YOU!~ *Hope the hugs okay by suthern* ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
thank you all for the very kind replies...I do appreciate it...I only wish I had more time to read some of all of "yalls" wonderful work....thanks again... |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is smooth and salty-I like it!  Nan |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Mr.Toe...I thought you were just a funny, sweet man...I didn't know you were talanted too! My vessel and thoughts and we Shall set our hand And souls together Upon the rolling sea I guess I was wrong sailor! This is a voyage of excellence...  ~ hugs to a sailor from a sailorLyra |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
All this time I thought it was LngJnAg out there on that boat... And all this time it was really you... Kewl write, ToeMan... Just in case you get lost at sea..  [This message has been edited by Nan (06-14-2002 09:01 AM).] |
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bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
I love the sea and your poetry. |
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