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ambermize
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since 2001-04-21
Posts 157
California

0 posted 2002-06-13 03:14 AM



First loves I have come to think,
Are not supposed to last,
But meant to teach the way to feel,
And be left within the past.

Becuase loving someone that much,
Can't be fair to your soul,
Needing someone deep inside,
Just to make you whole.

And tears that flow so freely,
And bleed down deep inside,
Should be kept in safe regard,
Not engulfed inside his lies.

And words that burn the lips to say,
Should never have been spoken,
To lose myself agian like that,
Would surely leave me broken.

Pain that glows in moonlight,
As a heart must sleep alone,
Comes at once to realize,
It can be no one's home.

© Copyright 2002 amber mize - All Rights Reserved
baerlon
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 197
Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA
1 posted 2002-06-13 12:38 PM


And words that burn the lips to say,
Should never have been spoken,
To lose myself agian like that,
Would surely leave me broken.


Those lines were great and well writen.  I felt alot of emotion from them.  I wish i could say that second and third love can hurt less if they end but i can't love is love.  i hope things work  out for you.


There's a peace inside us all
Let it be your friend
It will help you carry on
In the end
There's a peace inside us all
-Creed

[This message has been edited by baerlon (06-13-2002 12:40 PM).]

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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2002-06-13 01:41 PM


Well done

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2002-06-13 04:02 PM


so true, so true...and i love this one very much!
devina
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since 1999-10-28
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Cali
4 posted 2002-06-13 09:30 PM


Oh preach on sister Ambs...rofl

you know you're right...at least in my experience...

Love you sis!!
Tanya

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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