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wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2002-06-13 12:25 PM


hand sown with dollars stitched to its eyes
fingers prickled in dappled dew sun
ears with sleep from aging sore feet
toes in rows gain penance of fun

out of gas fidgets down the road further
middle of spoken unraveled its tongue
many of dollars poured from the causeway
some of fortuitous only were sung  

fill in on gas of bookstore convenience
help an old lady run across street
leave down the penny rich man foresaketh
footsteps are falling feebler beneath

not that this fate will smile upon me
many of why’s not reasons to be


[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (06-14-2002 09:41 AM).]

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2002-06-13 01:31 PM


many lines to think about..although I can't figure out what you are trying to say if anything *s
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EarthenSoul
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since 2002-05-30
Posts 163
WA, USA
2 posted 2002-06-13 02:18 PM


I like it, I don't understand it, but I like it.   There are some very interesting lines, a lot of words to ponder their play.
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2002-06-13 07:52 PM


No whys reasons to be sometimes....You're just so good Walt!
wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
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TEXAS (it's all big)
4 posted 2002-06-13 07:58 PM


thank you all three for understanding
elisaseyes
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since 1999-07-15
Posts 196
fort worth texas
5 posted 2002-06-14 09:33 AM


book store convenience

yep that's where I can find you

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