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Habitual Darkness... |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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You say- when it’s cold outside that I am the light to your dark days… You motion me- ~cuddle stay~ around you to strengthen your word sway… You bleed me- to perfection flicker-flame strikes my way… ~Just because~ Even my light- needs habitual darkness that it you to maintain today… Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Speechless  Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Muys Member
since 2002-04-06
Posts 389The Netherlands |
dear Devina You are the light inn his darkness You are a lucky woman In your country it is terrible i have see it on the Televisie. So sad it is all that fire. I think off you Kiss Muys  Titia's mother |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I'm not sure I understand, and I wonder if maybe there is a mispelled word. Your thoughts are intriguing and I like your premise a lot Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I understand. . . and I only have to say that it looks well on you my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
just me giving a bump to a lovely poem. I love your love poetry. *sigh* How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Even my light- needs habitual darkness that it you to maintain today… As always Devina, it's a real treat to read your poetry... Smiles2uSweetie *~coco~* |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Great write, Devina... enjoyed as always! ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Wonderful sweets! You never cease to amaze me with your words. Another addition to my library!! Hugs 2 U! Kris A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground [This message has been edited by Krishankins (07-06-2002 11:45 AM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This is intriguing and a slight bit of mystique....I sense this is the need of two....one who, when the comfort is wanted, turns to another...who derives inner pleasure from that need.... She being his flame....he being her's as well.... |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
hugsssss you....wonderful write!! Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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BrandeeM Junior Member
since 2002-05-01
Posts 45 |
I am digging tonight for sure... I loved this!!! and your honey should know I love it too!!!  take care Tanya!! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
How did I miss this, ms? Tis' a side, not oft seen. I must needs rummage through your drawers for more. ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
devina, your thoughts in your poetry always intrigued me. Very unique! mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Awww people...I am SO behind on response!! I am *bad* I know... but? I love you all and am taking therapy for the slowness...ROFL Seriously...I always appreciate the hugs and smiles you all place upon me!! thanks you so much!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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