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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-06-12 10:10 PM




Some Days Are Diamonds
~*Marge Tindal*~

Some days are diamonds
sparkling in lavaliere light
Reflecting magnificent beauty
when the words are held just right~

An indigo jewel in brilliant array
fell from the parchment of my mind today
Made it's way to the quilling-well of think
crawled into my versing ink~

It danced it's way down the page of blue
just the way I'd have it do
Polished phrases of sheer delight
Oh, I knew it was just right~

The write words in soft display
Today was a diamond
I like 'em that way~





~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Martie
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1 posted 2002-06-12 10:13 PM


Marge

Some poems are diamonds...that's for sure..this is one!  Hugs!

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2 posted 2002-06-12 10:15 PM



Someone turn off the lights!  LOL...
this is charming, Marge!

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3 posted 2002-06-12 10:19 PM


There are always diamonds in the ruff. This is one of them.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Madame Chipmunk
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4 posted 2002-06-12 10:20 PM


An indigo jewel in brilliant array
fell from the parchment of my mind today
Made it's way to the quilling-well of think
crawled into my versing ink~

Absolutely wonderful writing, Marge...and I love the little twinklies....Where did you get them?

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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5 posted 2002-06-12 10:27 PM


Margie girl darling heart sister and holder of the stars delight, firstly excellent poem written with your wonderful and amazingly beautiful touch. And secondly I love this twinkling you know me and glitter darling girl I cannot get enough of it.

Absolutely breathtakingly lovely writing Krissy will be so disappointed she missed this, Now she’ll have to wait till she comes in again That’ll teach her to try to upstage me. She is incorrigible so don’t encourage her she doesn’t need it.

This is truly wonderful writing I love it utterly utterly love it


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

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6 posted 2002-06-12 10:45 PM


your words shine as brightly as you do dear lady.  Hugs.
Donna

I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth)


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7 posted 2002-06-12 11:08 PM


Marge:  A little "gem" of a poem! Thanks for sending me the link!

Betty Lou Hebert

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8 posted 2002-06-12 11:36 PM


Marge,
Ever poem you write is a diamond.....some are just bigger than others.  this one sure shines.

Dan

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

ThisDiamond
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9 posted 2002-06-12 11:38 PM


Sparkling good wishes my friend.
You always offer a gem for all of us to delight. ThisDiamond

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10 posted 2002-06-13 12:50 PM


Diamonds being a girls best friend would make for a great day!  This is wonderful dear sweet friend!  once again you have blessed us with your wonderful muses!
Hugs
Cindi

Marge Tindal
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11 posted 2002-06-13 08:55 AM


MzMartieGirl~
YOU are a jewel !!

Karilea~
Shucks !  Thankee gal~

Loner~
Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed it~

Lyra~
Found the little sparkles a while back and discovered the code to make 'em sparkle~
Glad you like 'em gal~

MarshaLove~
Love the *glitter* of you~
You light up my life~

GentleSpirit~
You just say the nicest things~
Thanks sweetie~

BettyLou~
Love 'linking' you~

Dan~
Oh, such a nice surprise to find you peeking in~
Thank you so much~

ThisDiamond~
LOL ... I'll bet you just loved seeing your name in lights~
Thank you very much~

Cindi~
By golly ... I think a 'diamonds are a girl's best friend' day would be a GREAT addition to the calendar !
Thanks hon~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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12 posted 2002-06-13 01:06 PM


Some POEMS are dianmonds and this is one of 'em

Marge Tindal
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13 posted 2002-06-13 03:33 PM


InterLoper~
Sweetie .... you're just a doll !!
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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14 posted 2002-06-13 03:39 PM


Wishing that all your days are so, Marge!

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15 posted 2002-06-13 07:58 PM


Marge
You're a diamond out of the rough with sparkling words on display for all to read.
Once again unique and super projection!

Marge Tindal
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16 posted 2002-06-13 08:23 PM


Corinne~
Thank you sweetie~
So far .... so good~

ETHome~
I thank you so sincerely~
It's just nice when the words slip n' slide with such ease~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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17 posted 2002-06-14 03:05 PM


You just lit up my day... and added sparkles for good measure! *S*

Wishing you diamond days that fill your eyes with twinkles and sparkles. *S*

Marge Tindal
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18 posted 2002-06-16 05:07 PM


SweetSuthernGirlfriend~
I love the *sparkle* of your friendship~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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