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Madame Chipmunk
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0 posted 2002-06-12 08:01 PM


Take My Hand



Take my hand and hold it
until the end of time
let tenderness reign
with passionate pain
take my hand...I'll make you mine

lead me to tomorrow
where we'll love on distant shores
take my hand and hold it
I'll be forever yours

take my hand and lead me
throught the labyrinth of life
through uncharted mazes
and twilight blue hazes
take my hand...I'll be your wife

lead me from the darkness
and light my candle flame
through all of our days
set our passsions ablaze
take my hand...I'll take your name

take my hand forever
please never let me go
through amourous nights
and fantasy flights
take my hand...I love you so




Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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LilTai
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1 posted 2002-06-12 08:14 PM


So romantic and sweet and beautifully written...*sighs*...how do you do it?

   Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

Magnus
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2 posted 2002-06-12 08:15 PM


And YOU talk of MY romantic words....

Get real dear lady...   This is awesome!

Would you send me one too....just change
a few words...  (kidding, of course)

Way to go Lady C.    

SmartChick
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3 posted 2002-06-12 08:25 PM


Wow Lyra! This is sooooo beautiful.
Balladeer
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4 posted 2002-06-12 08:45 PM


You are the most romantic chipmunk I have ever seen!!! This guy must be a nut!!

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5 posted 2002-06-12 08:46 PM



Happy Anniversary, Lyra & David...

Enchantress
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6 posted 2002-06-12 10:31 PM


HAPPY ANNIVERSARY..LYRA & DAVID!!
~Hugs to you both~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

the_loner_23
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7 posted 2002-06-12 10:32 PM


That was so romantic and beautiful.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Madame Chipmunk
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8 posted 2002-06-15 02:41 PM


Thanks so much for the reply and the compliment, Tai...

~ lots of hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Madame Chipmunk
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9 posted 2002-06-15 02:43 PM


Thanks so much, Barry...
No No No.....you can't have this poem...it belongs to David, my true love and husband.

I could write you another poem...but my dear, I fear it would not smack of romanticism....just good solid friendship.

~ heart to heart friend hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Madame Chipmunk
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10 posted 2002-06-15 02:44 PM


Thanks so much, Sue...
I hope you got your computer running again.

~ many hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Madame Chipmunk
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11 posted 2002-06-15 02:46 PM


Thanks Michael...
He's not a real nut...just a real sweet acorn.

~ nutty acorn hugs from a chipmunk

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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12 posted 2002-06-15 02:47 PM


Thanks so much, Karilea...
Hurry back...I miss you

~ missing you hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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13 posted 2002-06-16 04:13 PM




(smiles) Oh Lyra, this is sooooooo beautiful, I cried reading this as so many of your angelic poems do! (kiss on cheek) May you always hold each other hand in hand and walk the coasts of your dreams happily forever, sweet friend, HAPPY ANNIVERSARY, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lyra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Duncan
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14 posted 2002-06-17 01:54 AM


take my hand forever
please never let me go
through amourous nights
and fantasy flights
take my hand...I love you so

Exactly, Lyra!  Happy day, you two.


Forgetting all I'm lacking
Completely and complete
I'll take your invitation
You take all of me

Lifehouse

nakdthoughts
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15 posted 2002-06-17 05:44 AM


you write as it should be

Always,
hugss
M

and Happy Anniversary to you both

Madame Chipmunk
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16 posted 2002-06-17 08:04 PM


Thanks so much, Noah...for that very poetic reply

~ welcome back hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Madame Chipmunk
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17 posted 2002-06-17 08:05 PM


Thanks so much, Duncan...I can't believe it has been 2 years...they sure go fast.

~ lots of hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Madame Chipmunk
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18 posted 2002-06-17 08:06 PM


Maureen...thanks so much for the reply and the anniversary wish as well.

~ thanking you hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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