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LilTai
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0 posted 2002-06-12 07:30 PM



With Every Touch

Every smile you give me
     warms my soul
           and melts away some pain

Everytime you hold my hand
     playing with my fingers
           you chase away some fear

With every tender touch to my face
     a gentle brush of your hand
            some hurt is brushed away

Each time you kiss my lips
     sweet like the sweetest honey
            you show me the pure taste of "Good" in this life

And everytime I'm in your arms
      home and safe at last
            you heal me with such caring love


   Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-06-12 08:55 PM



All good attributes...a nice penning...

Magnus
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2 posted 2002-06-12 09:32 PM


Beautifully written Tai.  You are a very
fortunate person to have this touch in your
life...

the_loner_23
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3 posted 2002-06-12 10:20 PM


Very beautifully written. I like it a lot.

Cold hands means a warm heart

LilTai
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4 posted 2002-06-12 10:31 PM


Sunshine, Magnus & Loner...

Thank you all for reading and responding =) It means a lot.  And of course, as is usual of you three, you are far too kind   
Thank you!

cpalmer
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5 posted 2002-06-13 10:53 AM


Excellent write my dear!  You have such a way with words!   I'm really enjoying reading your stuff.
Hugs
Cindi

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