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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-06-12 12:21 PM


I hate the feeling
This feeling of jealousy
I didn't know why
all these negetive feelings befall me

He keeps telling me he loves me
But his mind is wondering
I know not where
This leaves me pondering

I just hate this feeling of jealousy
Make it go away
I don't want it to stay
Oh hateful jealousy

Cold hands means a warm heart

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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-06-12 02:37 PM


Hey--there is a cure for jealousy! I simply find someone--er, something else to do!
EarthenSoul
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since 2002-05-30
Posts 163
WA, USA
2 posted 2002-06-12 02:46 PM


Good write!  Jealousy is tough one to deal with.  Just know that honesty and trust should be strong, then jealousy doesn't have a place to stand.

Serenity, I'm LMAO at your response!!!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2002-06-17 05:14 PM


When I am around someone that is jealous it is difficult for me to understand if it is done from love or for control...
If done through love jealousy is acceptable in some cases such as if they are reasonable but a controlling or manipulating jealous person has to go away...James

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