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Through The Doorway That Is You Dedicated to ‘Deer
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Through The Doorway That Is You Dedicated to ‘Deer |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Through The Doorway That Is You Dedicated to ‘Deer Through The Doorway That Is You In thought of lingering touch of mind I slowly rewind the thought and Waiting For The Call I hear it Strumming against the Flow of this delicate touch This brushing of my memory With fingertips graced with light Who teaches souls to sing anew? Rising and then falling with Livings’ beat its pulsing flow Measures breaths of this This is the pure poet’s kiss Don’t Ask me To Write A Poem Because I couldn’t capture this Ethereal trace of fine’s divine And when you’re soaring up there Say Hello To God For Me, tell him Thank you for your gift of write I would take A Bugman’s Advice And simply read these words of Wise and from within arise renewed Rhymes sublime in metered time In flow of pace then carries Hearts in bind to days gone by To thoughts of yes I heard him say The world is made of poet’s ray There’s A Small Pain In My Chest A pain of self realisation that I Shall Never Be A Poet not while The world turns and the sun still rises Then while the wind blows through me I read and marvel at how great you are And how unsuitable am I to write An apt and truthful tribute to The king of metered rhyme divine But this is my attempt to say Even if it’s just once that ‘Deer you ARE definitely a POET I found poetry Through The Doorway That is You Krissy Nice try mum but mine is much better don’t you think?  And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
What a fantastic and touching poem! Well done! Love, |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A beautiful tribute to Balladeer, Krissy...and now I will have to go and read your Mother's.  ~ poetic hugsLyra |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
A beautiful tribute, Krissy  Well done, indeed! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Krissy, this is a wonderful tribute to Balladeer. He is an amazingly gifted writer, and you've captured some of his most exquisite pieces via his titles. Very nicely done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Krissy, this is SO beautiful! A wonderful tribute indeed. ~hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Krissy, you and your mother both have done wonderful tributes to the mighty one, the styles are unique and yet intertwine to form a heartshape bond of love. I don't know about 'deer but I love this. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oh boy! Krissy, this is divine...and being a smart person....I WILL NOT, repeat.....WILL NOT take sides....(Your Mum threatened to do great harm to me) I know that 'Deer is smiling from all of these beautiful words (from both of you).. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Geesh! Is there no end to the talent in that family? Krissy, this is awesome...I am humbled (or as much as I can be) by this beautiful poem. Thank you so very much.. Who is better, you or your mum? Oh, Krissy, who is better...the sun or the moon, the apple or the orange, the hokey or the pokey? You are both dynamite ladies as well as poets....don't ask me to choose. I'll take you both!! Thank you, sweet woman-child |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You ladies sure know how to inflate an ego... the bugs will just never be the same again... he won't have the heart to squish any of 'em... |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Well, can't deny that he deserves this and you did a wonderful job Krissy Oh it will be so much fun to see you in September!!!And Deer too for that matter. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
the wonder that is your thoughts even when sharing your joy in another's it comes across like velvet tongues upon silken ears Hi ol' buddy! jeff *smile* |
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