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. . . Capturing you . . . |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I roll over and your scent, on the pillow, fills my nostrils. I inhale deeply trying to capture your essence; hoping you will be absorbed into my heart and soul. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Ummmm! I really like this one, Interloper. It is sweet, loving and sensual all rolled into one really excellent poem.  ~ poetic hugsLyra |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
A lovely poem! Thanks, I enjoyed reading it! Love, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Pillow talk... good stuff... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OHMY!!....just...OHMY!!!  ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Bob hi there, this is excellent you can breathe me in anytime. This is sensational writing lay against my heaving soul and inhale my breath I love this one you certainly can write  Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers at every pore with instant fires Andrew Marvell 1621-1678 [This message has been edited by Krissy (06-12-2002 12:46 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper, You woke up the audience with this one. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ah..yes, it's the scent (I'm one of those women who steals her man's clothing to wear too) you've captured ME with this one! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bob darling boy this is exceptionally good writing, truly exquisite, the images that you’ve painted in this are utterly utterly wonderful you really can write wonder. I swear you’re writing with stars again darling boy Breathe me in inhale me Let me sink into you totally Let my soul swirl all through Bathing you in dreamers dew Breathe me in feel the touch Of starry dreams and such Feel my breath passing through Brushing over souls renew Breathe me in savour me Touch the thoughts of ecstasy Flow with the feel of bliss Wrapped in lovers kiss I utterly utterly love this it is exquisite writing, and you’ve excelled here. Love and warm stuff As always Slushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Lyra ~ OKAY! Now I don't have to write anymore Morcastling ~ Thank you. Sunshine ~ Did you like that movie, too? Nancy Lee ~ Oh me! Wow! Thanx Krissy ~ I will breathe you in the deepest essence of soul and we will be one Sy ~ Hmmmmm. Who put 'em to sleep Serenity ~ Heh, heh, heh. The trap has sprung, the prey is within ... and she knows it Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Magnificent one ~ I'm breeeeeeeeathing in, inhaaaaaaaaling deeply. Wow! What a beautiful write. Please post it for all to read, luv Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (06-12-2002 01:54 PM).] |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Loved this one, Interloper... ~R.T. "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Interloper, How the small words can mean so much! Wow this is awesome my friend! Enjoyed Cindi |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Love rolling up in his scent Interloper, just laying there and breathing it in. Well done...sighs... I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth) |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Could bury my head there...long time..like that stuff..Love this poem. Sincerely, Reg |
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Daylily Junior Member
since 2002-06-10
Posts 22USA |
I really like this one! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Tiers ~ I'm glad Vanadana ~ Thank you. Cindi ~ Wow! Thanks a lot GS ~ Your sigh just melted me Regina ~ Gee, you flatter me (and I like it )Daylily ~ I think your first visit to my work. Thank you for the read Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (06-14-2002 03:00 PM).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ah... so this is what life is like when you share your bed with someone who isn't feline. *G* This is beautiful, Interloper... I liked it very much. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
no better way to say love then this.... stunning Interloper~ Lauren~ Its been a long road |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*Sigh* |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
Oh, {sigh} Oh, my. Admiring you at Passions. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
suthern ~ A truly southern compliment Thank you.Lauren ~ Whoa! No better way? You are too kind, dear lady SEA ~ You know you've melted my heart, don't you gal? BrightStar ~ Thank you. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
What a great poem - with this my soul and my spirit now have an emotional understanding of love. Thanks - Paul |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Ooohhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, I have missed reading your words so so much, I was on vacation for a wqeek and I got back Saturday night! (big hugggssssss) may her perfume of love forever fill your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oooh lala this poem is sweeeeeeeeeeet... Thanx4the treat of a read PoetFriend... *~coco~* |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hm, how did I miss this? Love it, Bob Sandra |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
just a wonderful poem - short but deep - simple but complex - nicely done - Paul |
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