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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2002-06-12 05:35 AM


     old iron shudders
     she swings her metal
     like a sword
     chopping air,
     then lets it live

     I am leather skined
     sitting astride
     whispering about the miles
     we have shared,
     between windmills
     that would attack
     then die

     below, at the bay
     night is a goddess
     finger beckon arrows fly
     I slide the gauntlet
     and let the razors slice
     I dive upon her protrusion,
     to be buried by her shimmer

     and tomorrow, perhaps
     I will ride from her womb
     with sunlight colors
     dripping from my skin
     playing the spoke harps
     with blind fingers of time


©Dark (OG road series)

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (06-12-2002 11:02 AM).]

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2002-06-12 06:19 AM



     playing the spoke harps
     with blind fingers of time

can imagine this one now DS.  Love your road series stuff.  Good morning..

I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth)


Sunshine
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2 posted 2002-06-12 06:59 AM



Good morning, Don Quixote....

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2002-06-12 07:18 AM


GS, thanks babe..just some of my other skin stuff..


Sunshine, good morning lady, thanks for the eye swath across my horizon

Enchantress
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4 posted 2002-06-12 08:31 AM


Dark~
Enjoying the view
on your road series.
~Morning Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Kethry
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5 posted 2002-06-12 09:30 AM


Dark,
you could use your blind fingers to write magic on any day.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2002-06-12 09:42 AM


Dark Stranger
Nothing subtle about this. It's down right sujestive. LOL

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2002-06-12 09:50 AM


Enchantress, thanks babe for the sweet whispers.

Kethry, you bless me with your reads and replies, thank you

Sy, Sir, you make me smile when you leave a card on my humble pen places.

Martie
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8 posted 2002-06-12 10:02 AM


Good Morning, DS

Beautiful view, you!

vandana
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9 posted 2002-06-12 10:35 AM


enjoy
Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2002-06-12 10:53 AM


ms martie, thanks lady friend, waving over the smoke...

vandana, humble thanks to you

Interloper
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11 posted 2002-06-12 11:53 AM


Huh?  Did you really say that?  
I'm glad you did

Dark Stranger
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12 posted 2002-06-12 12:05 PM


Interloper, scoots got to be loved too?  thanks amigo
rwood
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13 posted 2002-06-12 12:16 PM


More...of this. Your views are mind rides I adore.

Sincerely,
Reg

Dark Stranger
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14 posted 2002-06-12 12:23 PM


Regina,

would take you along..
when do you have to be home?
thanks hon

Mistletoe Angel
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15 posted 2002-06-16 04:53 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this wonderful series, sweet friend, your words always take us to such surreal and out of this world places that sparkle with rainbows of imagery! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
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16 posted 2002-06-16 05:31 PM


Very descriptive...like this...James
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