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Magicmystery
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since 2002-02-13
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Windsor, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2002-06-12 01:32 AM



I'll Be There midifile

Dreamer

Sometimes its hard to find my thoughts,
Searching through a forest without trees.
For my eyes are often beyond your own,
And you can only guess what a dreamer sees.

Music, ah there’s life, and I live in song.
And although poetry moves sightless,
Through inner walls, I find my vision,
And in your eyes, I see my inspiration.

Sometimes I look away from dreams, from you,
Afraid of what I might find in your eyes,
A reflection of myself,
Another searching child.

I’ve been so often hurt giving up,
Growing up......saying good-bye.

But dreamers never forget
The loves they’ve known,
And although we’re far apart,
You’ll never be alone.

I may be closer than you know,
And I find it hard to let you go.

Sherry Gardner

Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

© Copyright 2002 Sherry Lynn Gardner - All Rights Reserved
Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
1 posted 2002-06-12 02:14 AM


This is a fabulous poem It's always wonderful when somone else can inspire us. Dreams are always with us, holding onto them, and reaching for new ones keeps the world going round. Thanks for sharing this poem here with us.
ethome
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2 posted 2002-06-12 02:49 AM


Sherry
This is a super poem!
I like this.."Sometimes its hard to find my thoughts,
                              Searching through a forest without trees."

Great intro!
Then this is great......

                  "Music, ah there’s life, and I live in song.
                   And although poetry moves sightless,
                   Through inner walls, I find my vision,
                  And in your eyes, I see my inspiration."

Love the connection at the end too!

Good work!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-06-12 12:43 PM


Sherry,
Well my friend...you have gone and done it this time...
Just blew me away with this beautiful write!!

"Music, ah there’s life, and I live in song.
And although poetry moves sightless,
Through inner walls, I find my vision,
And in your eyes, I see my inspiration."

Fantastic stanza here...I love the rhythm..
Well...to tell you the truth, I am speechless!!
I'll come back for another read...and another, and another...
This treasure is going into my library right now!!

~Hugs to you my poetic neighbour~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2002-06-12 12:47 PM


Magicmystery
A magic carpet of words, enjoyed.

alterego
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since 2002-02-23
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Toronto, Ontario, Canada
5 posted 2002-06-13 12:34 PM


Sherry, you will need to post your stuff a bit earlier in the evening if you want more people to see it.

That said, this is a very nice piece - very etherial.  Bi-located, like in a dream, as well.  Was that intentional?

Love

Mom


alterego
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since 2002-02-23
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6 posted 2002-06-13 12:35 PM


ooops double post

[This message has been edited by alterego (06-13-2002 01:13 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2002-06-16 06:46 PM


"I’ve been so often hurt giving up,
Growing up......saying good-bye.

But dreamers never forget
The loves they’ve known,
And although we’re far apart,
You’ll never be alone.

I may be closer than you know,
And I find it hard to let you go."




(smiles) Oh Sherry, this is sooooooo beautiful and so very true, sweet friend, you are a true dreamer and as long as you hold all your dreams and memories close, true joy is yours to hold forever and you will forever be happy! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sherry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Magicmystery
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since 2002-02-13
Posts 821
Windsor, Ontario, Canada
8 posted 2002-06-16 08:09 PM


Hey there Noah, Incidently, I was about your age when I wrote this.... way way back in 1984.... or maybe it was earlier.... but I was a teenager then.... love ya sweetie.. thanks...

Sherry

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