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Faeries Dance |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Faeries Dance ~*Marge Tindal*~  ~~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~ Tiny Faeries dance from dusk till dawn in Bluebell slippers they've put on Drink their fill of moonbeam spill from bloom of Lisianthus cup The bottom of the garden is just where you'll find the Faeries at play on end of a new summer's day Shhhhhhhhhh not a squeak take a peek You will find magic abounds in the night filled with the Faeries sound Little voices lilt with song Come on down, I'll take you along where Faeries dance from dusk till dawn ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ ~And all because I picked a Lisianthus blossom today and told Bill it was a Faerie cup~ ~I love it when they *gift* me with poetry~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
That was a fun poem. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Did you chant "I beleive in fairies" to save Tinkerbells life.I did but I was too grown up to say it out loud. paladin |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is adorable, Marge...I love the way you write your poems into shapes.  ~ little faery hugsLyra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Julie~ Thanks so much .... it was fun to do~ Paladin~ I DID .... out loud !! Thanks fella~ Lyra~ Thanks gal ... they really take on a shape of their own ... must be Faerie magic~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You don't have to be on a spiritual path to believe in Fairies, you just need to have a heart that can love... to have just once in your life wished upon a star. ~I believe in Fairies~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I'd love to come on down *s maybe....someday hugsssss M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, A delightful write, enjoyed |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, have you been drinking from buttercups again. The faeries do dance through your work. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I love it when they gift you too...  |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awww Marge! I love the fairy picture. And, the poem is just lovely. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: I do believe in fairies and I have fairy rings on the grass under the apple tree to prove that they dance on my lawn! Charming poem! Betty Lou Hebert |
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MIdsummerRain Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175St. Louis, Missouri |
I belive in faeries now; what a fun write! ~Rayne For in much wisdom is much grief |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
I'll always show up for a faery write.... I am a grounded nymph myself... I love the way your write shapes into your work. beautiful! Love, Light and Peace, Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Marge, Such fun poetry all wrapped up in one neat package! This is beautiful and I love the picture! Hugs Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I was going to try and pick out a line or two I thought was super special but they're all so wonderful that I had to back off and just encase the entire poem in a frame of mental display as another of the fine works of ...Marge Tindal Super work! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I believe everything is possible Marge! I do believe.....I do believe..... I love the way you presented this Marge. Hugs to you. I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth) |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my heart this is utterly utterly wonderful. You’ve always been able to entrance me and lately your magic pen seems to be writing such wonder that I’m amazed by the beauty of it all. You certainly have written an absolutely delightful soul cheering poem here. This is truly exquisite. I love it love it love it   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Auntie Margie girl you have to know this is absolutely perfect writing, it fairly skips across the page with delight. I’m very fond of fairies, particularly blond one’s who go by the name of Auntie Margie girl. Unless you count as an angel? Which you may well do This is really special and I love it a wonderful format too, something you are excellent at Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You know? I know! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
All that from picking a posey? GR8! 1derful! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Muys Member
since 2002-04-06
Posts 389The Netherlands |
I love the songs of faeries Muys |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
*Friends~ No poet could ask for more than you give ... thank you all for the kindness of such wonderful responses~ Enchantress~ Ahhhhh, so THAT'S why they come ! Thank you~ WynterMyFriend~ ANYTIME .... and I'll keep my fingers crossed~  Seymour~ Thank you dearest poet~ Kethry~ I just can't wait until September !!! I'll have the Buttercups in full bloom too~ Thanks gal~ Martie~ Awwwwwwwwww ~ SuzieQ~ I thank you so sincerely~ BettyLou~ Oh ... I have seen the faerie rings ... soooooo, WE believe~ Thank you sweet lady~ MidSummerRain~ Ahhhhhhh, now you will find them dancing upon YOUR lawn~ Thanks dear~ MagicMystery~ Ahhhhhh, a 'grounded nymph' ... I like that~ I will wish you wings to see all things~ Thank you so much~ Cindi~ SO GOOD to see you gal~ Thanks for peeking in on the Faeries~ SweetGentleSpirit~ *hugs* ... thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it~ MarshaLove~ Gal ... think my muses (and the Faeries) like my new address ? *hugs* sweetie~ Krissy~ Ahhhhhh, now my day is complete ... Good to see your smile dancing among the Faeries at play~ *HUGS* Karilea~ AND you know that I know that you know~ *HUGS* InterLoper~ Not just 'any old posey' .... a delicately lovely Lisianthus blossom~ They just MUST contain Faerie magic~ MuysDearLady~ And I love knowing you hear the songs of the Faeries~ Just adore sharing with you, my friend~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (06-12-2002 03:15 PM).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- This made me smile.  Thanks for sharing the 'gift'. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (06-18-2002 05:31 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ "Come on down, I'll take you along where Faeries dance from dusk till dawn" Got your bedroll ready !!! September is a beautiful time for watching the FLORIDA 'Faeries Dance' upon the lawn in DeLand !!! Love you sweetie~ *Hugs* ~*Me*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Marge, I have a nine year old daughter who would love to see the fairies dancing.. Such a picture you paint with your words and the images you give us... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I must be blonder than I thought (checking roots) for I would have sworn I'd responded to this one... Maybe I used disappearing ink? LOL This is such a beautiful gifting, Marge... and such a delight to read. *S* I enjoyed! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ Ahhhhh, the innocence of a child~ She has only to believe ... for that IS the magic~ HeyBlondie~ LOL ... you got me in a *giggle*~ I 'think' the Faeries liked your 'other' reply so much ... they took it to the Woodsey Forest to share at the dance~ Love you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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