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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-06-11 07:27 PM


No longer can I fight these feelings
I hold deep inside for you
You're my very reason for living
A great part of all I do

I must give in to my passion
And surrender to your charms
How many nights I've envisaged
Being held within your arms

My dreams are filled with images
Of a love that feels brand new
I feel so much joy and rapture
At the thought of loving you

Now here you stand before me
I see my dreams have all come true
For together we'll greet the sunruse
And I'll spend my days loving you

My love for you is eternal
And it comes as no surprise
That I see a picture of perfection
Standing right before my eyes

My knight in shining armour
Has swept this maiden off her feet
The many ways you show you love me
Still makes my heart skip a beat

Suetang

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2002-06-11 09:16 PM


and let it keep right on skipping a beat.

You are such a romantic woman... very nicely
so..

shoffswife
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2 posted 2002-06-12 10:02 AM


very nice poem...i was reading it and thinking of how i could relate to the feelings expressed by you.
very nice and very romantic.

Kethry
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Victoria Australia
3 posted 2002-06-12 10:05 AM


Sue,
how loving and romantic is this poem...very much so.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Madame Chipmunk
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4 posted 2002-06-12 12:32 PM


I loved the pure feel of romance in this poem, Sue...

~ poetic hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Daylily
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5 posted 2002-06-12 12:36 PM


Well done--bravo!
Interloper
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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2002-06-12 01:38 PM


Hooray!
Skipety, skip

Larry C
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7 posted 2002-06-12 05:37 PM


Yup...that's the stuff I like.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2002-06-12 06:32 PM


Wonderful...really like the title...fill this way myself about a relationship I'm in...James
Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2002-06-12 07:22 PM


Yep, sometimes it don't pay to fight it.  Loved the poem Sue.

I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth)


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10 posted 2002-06-17 08:26 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, you are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, your wonderful words always shine with such romance and I know your feelings will forever be filled with light! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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