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Madame Chipmunk
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0 posted 2002-06-11 05:40 PM


For My Parents...a Thank You



You created me from your love
my body grew from the seeds of you
you knew me before I knew myself
from your passion, you gifted my spirit proud
with your values of trust and true

you sculpted me strong
to face pain and fear
and painted me shiny with courage
with burnished shadings of empathy
the better to shed life's tears

on my soul, you stamped a fervor
for all of life's lovely offerings
romance, children, flowers
forests at sunset, and poetry
and the scent of the rain in the early spring

and finally, with your signature
on the edges of my seeing
your gift of life
suffused with love
my parents...I thank you for being





Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

[This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (06-11-2002 09:58 PM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-06-11 05:58 PM



Yes, folks, thank you
VERY MUCH for gifting us with a Chipmunk....

and congrats to you,
kind lady, for gifting us so many smiles...

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2002-06-11 06:41 PM


Lyra,
A lovely thank you, a lovely write from a first rate poet.

SmartChick
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3 posted 2002-06-11 07:35 PM


Oh Lyra, this is such a beautiful poem for your parents. And, Congradulations on your 4000th post.

[This message has been edited by SmartChick (06-11-2002 07:36 PM).]

Magnus
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4 posted 2002-06-11 07:59 PM


We owe them a lot.  For the gift of you has
been a spring of life here at PiP....I am
very much proud to have your poetic acquain-
tance....

Hugs dear lady,  and congratulations on your
4000th post...

mycafe
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5 posted 2002-06-11 09:05 PM


a beautiful poem, a beautiful tribute ! And congrats on your 4000th post! :-)

mycafe

Martie
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6 posted 2002-06-11 09:10 PM


Awww...they look just like you!  A Smile coming your way for this one, so sweet the sentiment and poem...but the photo, I loved!  Congratulations, sweet lady, for the 4000 and thanks for being a friend!
DawnG
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7 posted 2002-06-12 01:13 AM


Lyra,

This is a very beautiful tribute to your parents. Our parents go through a lot for us and not think a thing of it. As long as their children are happy, they can deal with whatever life throws them.  I hope you share this beauty with your parents.

                                 Dawn

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8 posted 2002-06-12 01:14 AM


I forgot to congratulate you on your 4000 post and thank you very much for your kind and beautiful reply to my 1000 post. *hugs*

                               Dawn

Magicmystery
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9 posted 2002-06-12 01:48 AM


Congradulations on your 4000th post!  Impressive!  This is a very beautiful poem to commomorate your parents' love for you and for each other. Lovely, Lyra.

Sherry

Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

ethome
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10 posted 2002-06-12 03:04 AM


Lyra...CONGRATS! on the 4000th post. It has been a pleasure to read your work.

This is a beautiful picture and poem to match..........may you and your parents experience many more!

Kit McCallum
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11 posted 2002-06-12 06:55 AM


What a wonderful gifting of thanks to your parents Lyra. You've captured your feelings beautifully ... loved this.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Madame Chipmunk
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12 posted 2002-06-12 11:21 PM


Thanks Karilea...I think they were probably very happy to give me up...

~ sunshiny hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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13 posted 2002-06-12 11:22 PM


Thank you so much, Sy...
It was my Dad who taught me about writing.

~ thank you hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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14 posted 2002-06-12 11:25 PM


Thanks so much, Sue...I can't believe that somehow, I got to 4000.  Probably because I am addicted to this place and all of my wonderful friends here.

~ hugs of thank you

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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15 posted 2002-06-12 11:40 PM


Thanks so much, Barry...I will have to tell my Mother what you said.  My Father passed away in 1988, so its pretty hard to tell him, but I have a feeling that he already knows.
I  am proud to be your fellow poet too, Barry....and I am so happy to be here.

~ poetic appreciation hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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16 posted 2002-06-12 11:42 PM


Thank you so much, mycafe...I appreciate your generous compliments and congrats.

~ hugs from the heart

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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17 posted 2002-06-12 11:44 PM


Thanks so much, Martie...and thank you so much for being a friend also...

~ hugs to a very fine poet friend

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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18 posted 2002-06-12 11:46 PM


Thank you so much, Dawn...I will send it to my Mother.  My Dad passed away in 88...but I know that he still knows how much I appreciate him and always will.


~ thank you hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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19 posted 2002-06-12 11:48 PM


Thanks so much, Sherry....I certainly appreciate your appreciation.

~ hugs of appreciation

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Madame Chipmunk
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20 posted 2002-06-12 11:49 PM


Thank you so much, Eric...
I think it has been my pleasure to read your work also...

~ thank you hugs to a fine poet

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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21 posted 2002-06-12 11:51 PM


Thanks so very much, Kit...
I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.  This is one of the only ones which I wrote completely in one sitting....making only very few minor changes to it.

It just wrote itself straight out of my heart.

~ heart hugs and thanks to a fine poet

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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22 posted 2002-06-13 06:06 PM


Lyra my darling friend Oh my word, this is utterly gorgeous, HALT! Stop right there, is it legal to have poetry this spectacular and wonderful? I think I shall have to protest this is just too perfectly divine darling girl, absolutely wonderful. The beauty and love you’ve incorporated into this poem is incredible. Is this good? Do witches cast spells? Mmmmmm it’s a blinding poem darling heart, absolutely blinding. That means I love it utterly utterly love it

C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S
4,000 Well Done


And every single one of them truly wonderful darling girl

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

     
  


Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

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Gentle Spirit
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23 posted 2002-06-13 09:57 PM


Lrya, truly beautiful.  Makes me think of my own father and how much love he gave.  This is a wonderful tribute hon
Congrats on the 4000!!   hugs

I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth)


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24 posted 2002-06-14 03:14 PM


Through the past 4000 posts, we've come to appreciate you so much, Madame... so we thank them, too. *S* Congratulations on your milestone... This is a beautiful tribute!
catalinamoon
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25 posted 2002-06-14 04:09 PM


Beautiful poem, Lyra. Congratultions, too.
Sandra

Madame Chipmunk
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26 posted 2002-06-15 01:39 AM


Thanks so much, Marsha...Now how am I supposed to get to sleep with a compliment like that...
I think I will stay awake all night trying to get my head back to it's normal size...
that is...it I can ever fit it out the door of this room and into the bedroom

~ loving thanking hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Madame Chipmunk
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27 posted 2002-06-15 01:41 AM


Thanks so very much, Donna...
My Dad died in 88, but my Mom is still going strong...
over 50 years of smoking 3 packs a day, and all she has is mild emphysema.

~ loving hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Madame Chipmunk
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28 posted 2002-06-15 01:42 AM


Thanks so much for that very sweet reply, Suthern...

~ lots of hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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29 posted 2002-06-16 04:01 PM


"and finally, with your signature
on the edges of my seeing
your gift of life
suffused with love
my parents...I thank you for being"




BRAVO!!! Oh Lyra, God Bless You, ooohhhhhhhh...I'm sooooooo proud of you, I LOVE THIS!!! (kiss on cheek) I just know your parents are such wonderful people like you are, for it was their golden hearts that made your golden heart possible that lights up these poetic wonderlands! This is a fabulous dedication, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! CONGRATULATIONBS ON 4000!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lyra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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