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devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

0 posted 2002-06-11 01:51 PM

Feelings…

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Mine
were photos
black and white
Made
of dreams
in dead of night

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Mine
were folds
of paperweight
Made
of yearning
in consummate

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Mine
were tantrums
of unhappy craft
Made
in pitiful
lacking aftermath

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Mine
were lonely
bidden substitute
Made
of handsome
deigned constitute

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Mine
are freelance
dancing in tune
Made
with love
from me to you

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2002-06-11 01:56 PM

I enjoyed reading about your feelings

Very well expressed, indeed.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

EarthenSoul
Member

since 2002-05-30

Posts 163
WA, USA

2 posted 2002-06-11 02:29 PM

This is a beautiful poem! Thank you for sharing your Feelings. Very well written.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-06-11 03:22 PM

devina~Very very nicely penned indeed!
Enjoyed so very much today.
Love the way you express yourself.
~hugs~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2002-06-11 03:24 PM

I loved this expression of the many parts of you. Well done Devina.

Like a red brick,
in a white wall
somebodies brush
forgot to paint...
lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

5 posted 2002-06-11 03:52 PM

I've always enjoyed your poetry, this is no exception.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2002-06-11 04:07 PM

"whoa, whoa, whoa Feelings. . . "
Sven apologizes for the cheesy lyrics. . .

really though, I liked this. . . I'm wondering what mine would be. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

7 posted 2002-06-11 05:10 PM

Interloper-expression huh?? least I'm not screamin this time!!! ty

EarthenSoul- glad you enjoyed...you are very welcome!!

Enchantress- then we have the same opinion of each other, no?? ty sweet lady

Gentle Spirit- many parts indeed..ty

Nicole- always you have been gracious in your comments...I thank you for that sweets!!

Sven- oohh...singin to me now huh? *must hear the long version to decide*

ty my dear friend...would be curious as to yours..ahem..feelings...

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

BrandeeM
Junior Member

since 2002-05-01

Posts 45

8 posted 2002-06-12 11:00 AM

This is soo sweet Lady...

love your expression!!!

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

9 posted 2002-06-12 02:03 PM

I wish I could express my feelings so eloquently.

Dawn

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2002-06-12 04:45 PM

enjoyed

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2002-06-17 10:13 PM

(smiles) YAY!!! Oh Tanya, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too smile every time I look at a picture of the girl Joanna I love or even imagine me with her! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tanya, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Alicia
Member

since 2002-03-22

Posts 279

12 posted 2002-06-17 10:22 PM

~Devina, each and every bit of this, really,...I'll read this again. Enjoyed the way you posted it too, very nice. *Peace.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

13 posted 2002-06-17 10:43 PM

Devina, enjoyed this...very nice how you
put each feeling within it's very own stanza.

Nicely done.

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

14 posted 2002-06-17 10:56 PM

thanks for your fine words to all of us - great poetry - Paul

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

15 posted 2002-06-18 01:55 AM

Ah, so this is what I miss when I'm not online for a while. Glad t' be back to read this!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

16 posted 2002-06-18 02:05 AM

just beautiful..its wonderful to see you here so much now.

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

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