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Open Poetry #21

Butterfly Wings

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-06-11 11:50 AM

Butterfly Wings

butterfly wings
dressed in
dented armor
a cast
once placed
needed as a
healing charmer
I wish to
throw away
the heavy
but is it
too soon
how many
times must
a burdened
butterfly
fly around
the moon

"The heart is the toughest part of the body, tenderness is in the hands." Carolyn Forche'

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2002-06-11 12:02 PM

Helen,
Never with the armour. May you soar. I will always love your poetry. Thanks.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2002-06-11 12:59 PM

slick one,
may your armor be cellophane
and the arrows be lip touch
smiles...enjoyed it ms

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-06-11 01:04 PM

Helen,
Nobody really knows, Nice write.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2002-06-11 01:14 PM

I love the finale!
Well done, indeed

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

TwoHeartsOnePen
Member

since 2002-06-07

Posts 60
state of determination

5 posted 2002-06-11 01:16 PM

the butterfly must fly until he lands

wonderful poem

Distance is the prison for our bodies, but no prison could weaken our passion.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-06-11 01:24 PM

Helen~
This is stunning!

~Hugs~

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