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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2002-06-11 10:09 AM


Under a soft rose tinted lamp
you tumbled me upon the bed
my rosey comforter beneath
your mouth crushing my lips of red

Rose petal lay around the room
and candles scented rosily
Your tenderness is sweetly real
the way our love shall always be.

(Just a fantasy, alas)

© Copyright 2002 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-06-11 10:27 AM


catalinamoon
But a lovely fantasy. Enjoyed

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In Your Poetic Mind
2 posted 2002-06-11 11:13 AM


Sandra~

Very loving fantasy.....it should always be this way....hugsssss


Lauren~

Its been a long road
Getting from there to here
Ive known a wind so cold, seen the darkest days
but now the winds I feel are only winds of change

vandana
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3 posted 2002-06-11 11:17 AM


enjoyed
TwoHeartsOnePen
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state of determination
4 posted 2002-06-11 01:17 PM


can reality be ever so far away then?

enjoyed, thank you

Distance is the prison for our bodies, but no prison could weaken our passion.

EarthenSoul
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5 posted 2002-06-11 01:24 PM


Rosily Romantic....Just the way a fantasy should be.
So sweet I can smell the roses in the air!

Enchantress
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6 posted 2002-06-11 01:26 PM


Softly romantic Sandra.
Enjoyed the read...and the fantasy.
~Hugs~

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Deep in the heart
7 posted 2002-06-11 01:28 PM


I like your fantasies

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2002-06-11 03:26 PM


And yet this fantasy could be just a kiss away...James
Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2002-06-11 03:54 PM


A beautiful fantasy that could become a reality easily for one with such a beautiful heart and soul as yours Sandra.  Hugs to you.

I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth)


Sven
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10 posted 2002-06-11 04:06 PM


dream bigger. . . make the reality. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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11 posted 2002-06-16 06:34 PM




(sigh) Oh Sandra, this may just be a fantasy for now, but I know with all my heart love will be yours to hold forever and you'll find all your heart desires! (kiss on cheek) This is a lovely dream, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Tracey
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12 posted 2002-06-16 07:04 PM


And a beautiful one at that Sandra…and one that will come true one day. For the softest hearts cannot stay alone for long.

Everything is possible in the game of life
    (Simple Minds-Promised You a Miracle)

wranx
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13 posted 2002-06-16 07:25 PM


Hmmm... thought he. What wonderous heart beats beneath her breast, and does she like pizza?

~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

Madame Chipmunk
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14 posted 2002-06-16 08:06 PM


Oh but such a lovely fantasy, Sandra...
and so beautifully written.

~ fantasy hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Stapelton
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15 posted 2002-06-16 08:10 PM


one that will come true just give it time.
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16 posted 2002-06-16 08:44 PM


CatalinaMoon~
*smiles* here .... lovely thoughts~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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ethome
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17 posted 2002-06-16 09:12 PM


Now that's my kind of fantasy!

Nice images in these two verses........I can you slowly floating through the air in slow motion and then landing on the bed with the comforter billowing up all around you from the weight of your n...d body....Yep great fantasy!
He he have a nice day!

Cerenity
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18 posted 2002-06-17 11:50 PM


Hi Cat,

What a great write, have not been on this puter in a great while, hope all went well, this half still going some how, sending hugs.

Love, Cerenity

CocoBaci
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19 posted 2002-06-22 04:20 AM


Beautifulllllllllllll expression...
Thank you very much4this splendid read2nite...
Smiles2uSweetie...
*~coco~*

Duncan
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20 posted 2002-06-22 04:40 AM


...and sometimes, they come true.


Forgetting all I'm lacking
Completely and complete
I'll take your invitation
You take all of me

Lifehouse

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
21 posted 2002-06-22 10:05 AM


What a wonderful fantasy to have. Nw, if only we could make these fantasies come true.
*BIG HUGS*

Goodknight
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22 posted 2002-06-22 11:25 AM


quietly romantic and then deeply romantic - thanks I liked it lots - Paul
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