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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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as your caution is worn asunder so are pages torn from dreams with laughter finger ends my words are sharp edges that shave close there to the sin and skin of you you say the chills are lovely when cold steel is whet and goose flesh is risen I offer quick death pleasure to the lonely shape places you beg for slow slides and ask if love will be our tattoo ©Dark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (06-11-2002 07:43 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Adequate response: Ouch. Indepth reply - sharp... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
(wink) thanks ms sunshine...no metal parts really, just how close can one get with touch words.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Words can cut very close to the skin edge... care must be taken with smooth action. ~Morning hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
enchantress....yes ms, good morning hugs to you too...would never nick or cut with them..just sooth smooth thanks lady |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Ah, this works as both temptation and fact...well done. INclan |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger You skinned this cat very close, but with a sharp scapel. Enjoyed |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Only if you take forever with invisible ink touch Mr. Dark.. Sincerely, Reg |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
inclan, thanks for the review and comments sy, thanks you sir, a pleaure to have your eyes and words Regina, if you have the forever babe, I have the secret ink...thanks for the touch hon. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Good Morning, DS You are sharp edges this morning...Hugs across the blanket of fog. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie thanks babe for the wave and the dance feet under fog gown (can hear you but not see you) grin) |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
branded by his thoughts dagger plunges to the hilt sweet taste of metal Indigo |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
branded by his thoughts dagger plunges to the hilt sweet taste of metal Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
indi, no stickin' just draggin' the blade along sensitive places slowly enough to heal the seams thanks ms, (twice) (grin) |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Great line - if love will be our tattoo. Cor |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
cor....ink is such a lasting thing perhaps it serves love well thanks lady |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! Oh my, this is sooooo heartwrenchingly thoughtful, sweet friend, yes, every word matters so so much in a solid relationship and many will always be etched in our hearts with memories! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, may true love forever be a tattoo in your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
DS darling boy this is simply gorgeous, absolutely perfect. The flow of this river of words is a truth waiting for a question. Beautifully written, well done. You know I love this don’t you? Of course I do You always manage to write exquisitely in this you’ve excelled I love it utterly Love and light   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Noah, thanks my friend for the review ms Marsha, slow hugs to you lady friend, thanks so much |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much, DS... your words are as sharp as your title. *S* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
friend suthern, thanks for the read and the support |
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