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Open Poetry #21

Life Has Just Begun

EarthenSoul
Member

since 2002-05-30

Posts 163
WA, USA

0 posted 2002-06-10 06:51 PM

Feel the Earth spinning
'Round and round the Sun
The Winds are blowing
Life has just begun

Feel the Moon pulling
Always at the Tide
The laws of Nature
Forever abide

Time is infinite
Toss aside the clock
Listen to the Waves
Crashing upon Rock

Feel the energy
Watch the Lightning burn
And then the Thunder
When it comes his turn

The Earth keeps spinning
'Round and round the Sun
The Moon keeps pulling
Life has just begun

[This message has been edited by EarthenSoul (06-10-2002 07:13 PM).]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-06-10 07:02 PM

Trisha, this is very nice...love the flow
of it...Yes, the earth is ever spinning and
life has just begun...

LilTai
Member

since 2002-06-08

Posts 189
United States

2 posted 2002-06-10 08:24 PM

I like this a lot. Like Magnus said, it flows great. Nice job =)

Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2002-06-10 08:34 PM

I have to agree with the previous replies....nice flow and good writing....spin away!

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