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LilTai
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since 2002-06-08
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0 posted 2002-06-10 05:53 PM


(****I REALLY really appologize for writing so much tonight...I'm trying to stop, I swear! Sorry!!!)

A Child

A child born new
a new, untainted veiw
And unlike me and you
He doesn't think about what to do
Pure Instinct
is what I wish I had
Corrupted Decisions
are what make a life bad
Biased Favoritism
decides what we do
seems none of your decisions
are really up to you
Selfish Motivation
a personal declaration
Everything you do
reflects back upon you

The beauty of a child
a child with no anger
a child with no hate
...a child with no feelings to debate

Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2002-06-29 09:24 PM



A very interesting read...

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2002-06-29 09:31 PM


Tai,
we are all templates waiting for the imprint of love. Very well expressed poem.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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