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LilTai
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since 2002-06-08
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0 posted 2002-06-10 04:30 PM


I try to organize my thoughts on a pad
how I feel
about Life and Love
I don't know where I'm going
or if I'm going anywhere at all
I wish I could start all over
start a new beginning
write a different ending
I'm not sure what life has in store for me
So I'll just let it take me where it will
and make the best of what I can
while I can
Love, Live, and be Loved

-Tai

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-06-10 04:51 PM


That has a lot of truth in it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2002-06-11 07:04 AM


quote:
I try to organize my thoughts on a pad
how I feel
about Life and Love
I don't know where I'm going
or if I'm going anywhere at all

Organizing one's thoughts is a good habit to have...chances are it WILL help you get to where you want to go!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2002-06-11 07:15 AM


"Start a new beginning
write a different ending."
Me too sometimes...but the past won't let me do it...James

MidnightSon
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since 2002-05-15
Posts 312
between the gutter & the stars
4 posted 2002-06-11 05:21 PM


i like this. full of wandering...

"in this life, there's nothing but possibilities."
-Lucas "Empire Records"
Repost a couple of those closed ones another day. i like them, and i'd like a chance to respond.
hope the post limit didn't discourage ya.



"The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite."

[This message has been edited by MidnightSon (06-11-2002 05:24 PM).]

LilTai
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 189
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5 posted 2002-06-11 09:30 PM


Thank you all for responding...such kind words from all of you =) I appreciate it (Don't be scared to criticize though! You are all too kind )  
Thank you all again..

   Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

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