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LilTai
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since 2002-06-08
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0 posted 2002-06-10 04:19 PM


could you spare your lips for a kiss
or lend me your hand to hold
I'd be lucky to just see your face
to stare into your dark eyes
and watch that smile curl from your lips
so that you offer me your heart
seems like a dream
I don't know if I deserve you
or can give you what you need
But your heart I'll cherish
and press close to mine
existing in this perfect love


-Tai

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-06-10 04:52 PM


I found that in my bf Liam.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2002-06-11 04:26 PM



You've so much to say,
and I think we're going to enjoy
watching you unfold your tender moments...

LilTai
Member
since 2002-06-08
Posts 189
United States
3 posted 2002-06-11 09:32 PM


The_Loner_23 & Sunshine,
thank you both for commenting =)  Hehe, I got a little excited about finally being a member yesterday and posted a million things (I appologize for that LoL). Thanks for reading what I had to say =)

   Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

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