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LilTai
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 189
United States

0 posted 2002-06-10 04:14 PM

Through Noon & Half Past Dusk

Come with me
to that dark place
where lazy clouds sit beneath trees
walk with me
on rose petals
in the dessert of the road
I soar above the sun and moon
through noon
and half past dusk
dust settles on what is standing still
I am forever in movement
and motionless
settled in a thick forest of emerald trees
ivory leaves and golden branches
If you would stroll with me
through my mind
our minds intertwined
we could be love

-Tai
(im workin' on a signature

...)

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-06-10 04:15 PM

Welcome to Passions, Tai. Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-06-10 04:35 PM

Welcome to Passions...
Very nice entrance you have made....I look forward to reading more of your poetry and your responses to our wonderful family of poets!

~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

LilTai
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 189
United States

3 posted 2002-06-10 04:45 PM

Thanks for the kind welcome =)

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

4 posted 2002-06-10 05:38 PM

Welcome to passions,

enjoyed,
~R.T.

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-06-10 05:41 PM

Love all your poems so far.

Cold hands means a warm heart

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2002-06-10 06:54 PM

Enjoyed...James

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2002-06-10 10:18 PM

Very good write, enjoyed.
Sandra

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

8 posted 2002-06-10 11:05 PM

Welcome. Your style is unique and a definate compliment to all the wonderful poetry to enjoy here. ThisDiamond

devina
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

9 posted 2002-06-11 12:10 PM

You'll fit right in here!!!
LOVED your first post!!!

~*~*~*~*WELCOME~*~*~*~*

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

LilTai
Member

since 2002-06-08

Posts 189
United States

10 posted 2002-06-11 09:38 PM

Thanks everyone! You're all so nice here! LoL! I thank you all for the kind words, but I am thinking my poetry is a *bit* inferior to most of you *smiles*
Thanks again

Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2002-06-12 04:47 PM

welcome to passions

enjoy your read

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

12 posted 2002-06-12 05:16 PM

Welcome to passions!

This is so beautiful...you will love it here as we will love reading more of you work!
Hugs
Cindi

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

13 posted 2002-06-12 05:52 PM

LilTai,
Welcome, don't feel inferior we all write as we are led. I think your last line is almost perfect. "We could be love" it says so much.
Write on
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

14 posted 2002-06-16 02:49 PM

YAY!!! Ooohhhhh...this is such a beautiful debut, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! HAPPY FATHERS DAY!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet LilTai, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (smiles) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet LilTai, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

LilTai
Member

since 2002-06-08

Posts 189
United States

15 posted 2002-06-16 04:52 PM

Noah sweetheart,
*hugs* thank you so so much for what you said!! You are a true angel...replying to everyone's writing, finding the time to write your own (perfect) peices, and still being so kind about everything you do. Thank you so much, you are very, very appreciated

Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

16 posted 2002-06-16 06:45 PM

I soar above the sun and moon
through noon
and half past dusk
dust settles on what is standing still
I am forever in movement
and motionless

I love the paradoxical tone to this poem...
its very beautiful.

~ welcoming hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

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