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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
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Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2002-06-10 01:59 PM


The beat
taken for granted
constant
perpetual
unaware of you

The pain
recklessly
skipping
falling behind
absorbing you

The rush
warmed by flow
forward
overwhelming
closing in on you

The love
eternal
powered
endlessly
and only for you


create an addiction .... share a smile!!

© Copyright 2002 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-06-10 02:28 PM


That is sweet. I feel the emotion.

Cold hands means a warm heart

catalinamoon
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2 posted 2002-06-10 03:21 PM


Strong feelings, Craig. Well expressed.
Sandra

ctowen
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3 posted 2002-06-10 03:30 PM


Sandra - this was a piece I had started sometime ago ...
thanks to your mornings tribute, I was able to find the missing words ...
... thank you.
This is only one day .... tomorrow is only one more. I truly hope you feel and share the wave of emotions shared here on these pages of blue ...
the connection is you.

Loner -  thank you ... sweet of you to reply.

[This message has been edited by ctowen (06-10-2002 09:22 PM).]

Enchantress
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4 posted 2002-06-10 03:48 PM


Wow!  Very strong feelings and emotions penned here Craig!
Love this...into my library it goes!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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5 posted 2002-06-10 03:53 PM


Is it truely possible for one human to show soo much passion and intensity just from a few words?  Well, you have managed to to that.  This is a wonderful piece that I will, if you don't mind have to share with others.

Thank you for the read.

Love,
Lady

Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.


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6 posted 2002-06-11 10:19 AM


Craig~

Always heartfelt when coming from you....lovely, tender words.....I am keeping this...


Lauren~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2002-06-18 11:48 PM




(sigh) Oh Craig, you pen the perfect definition and epitome of "heartfelt" that should be gazed upon every dictionaey reader, sweet friend, I LOVE THIS, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

my3monkeytoes
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In the Carolina Breeze
8 posted 2002-06-18 11:49 PM


This is melodic!  Great writing!

~Sydney McLean

Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia
9 posted 2002-06-19 12:30 PM


Hello Craig

You write of love and romance so effortlessly and it is always a pleasure to read your outstanding words.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

ethome
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10 posted 2002-06-19 05:03 AM


This is so easy to read and feel
Nice tender words!

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