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Decaflame
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0 posted 2002-06-10 11:33 AM



Do you recall tan tingles
where sand spangled
you golden

that curve above your clavicle
cupped water
with your arms reaching up

and I bathed you
warmer still
after we dug for more than clams

[This message has been edited by Decaflame (06-10-2002 11:38 AM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-06-10 11:36 AM


Decaflame
Nice rite, I've been clam digging. LOL

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2002-06-10 11:51 AM


I recall where
tan ends
and ivory
flesh reveals

I remember when
we bathed
and your curves

after digging  
for ...


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (06-10-2002 11:53 AM).]

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-06-10 02:25 PM


*naughty giggle* Good stuff!!
Magnus
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4 posted 2002-06-10 08:20 PM


ooooo, another one of these sneaky little
snippets of sinsuality......

I like!

Balladeer
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5 posted 2002-06-10 09:38 PM


I can dig this very well...
Severn
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6 posted 2002-06-10 10:14 PM


Another sigh...

wonderful..

snippets are fun..and these ones particularly expressive.

K

the_loner_23
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7 posted 2002-06-10 10:15 PM


I like. Very steamy stuff.

Cold hands means a warm heart

ethome
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New Brunswick Canada
8 posted 2002-07-01 12:38 PM


A deeper dig and a deeper breath makes for rising of the breast....among other things....hummm this is so cute!
Bridget Shenachie
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9 posted 2002-07-01 02:08 PM


Blush!

Shenachie

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