Oceanic Recollect [snippet 1]

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Open Poetry #21

Oceanic Recollect [snippet 1]

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2002-06-10 11:28 AM

You don’t know warm
until you’re in cold waters
until you skin to skin
your love
and slickly collide

you don’t know warm
until you’re in the arms
of love

bags123
Member

since 2002-06-06

Posts 128

1 posted 2002-06-10 11:29 AM

So true, thats as warm as it gets.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2002-06-10 11:40 AM

you will find warmth here
in my arms and in my heart
temperatures rise

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2002-06-10 11:54 AM

No wonder I'm always needing a blanket. *G*

This is beautiful, Deca... and so true. *S*

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-06-10 02:23 PM

Deca, how very true this is!

*Sometimes you don't know you're in Open 21
until you realize how alone you feel*

~Hugs~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-06-10 07:06 PM

I think I could realllllly like these little
snippets very easily and very quickly...

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2002-06-10 07:20 PM

enjoyed

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

7 posted 2002-06-10 10:06 PM

Nice, and simple...and true - one always needs contrast...and then a culmination..

(hmm, 'until you skin to skin' - is that meant to be you're?)

Huggles

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