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bags123
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since 2002-06-06
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0 posted 2002-06-10 11:04 AM


Miles north of N-Y-C
hidden by hills
unblemished creations
lay the mountains
of my heart

Superfluous solitude
life unburdened
of rules and schedules
spontaneous
renaissance


The world's ripe calamities
do not exist
amid the cool springs
in heaven's lathe
peace confides.


Loons trill in celebration
at each days end
welcome the gossamer moon
as an old friend
for supper



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Soleil Noir
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since 2001-12-19
Posts 688
USA
1 posted 2002-06-10 11:04 AM



lend the key
to cabin's door
for I would see
this, and more

DawnG
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since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494
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2 posted 2002-06-11 01:16 PM


Wow! This is a beautifully visual piece. Thanks for sharing with us.

                              Dawn

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