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Palette Perfect - for Madame Chipmunk, resident artist...
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Palette Perfect - for Madame Chipmunk, resident artist... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Palette Perfect mushroomed beige loom my beginnings, exposed in simple nudity, you see me situated before you, living awaits me in color jeweled pigments soon adorn me in spots and dots of crimson and cadmium lemon streams of manganese violet silked with ultramarine blue shall swath my shoulders, while cobalt teal and antwerp blue titivate my curves windsor emerald shall elevate status, as other tints and blushes, shades and traces come to call, in their blendings and swirls without regard of line or context, paying no heed soon, soon, my once pale countenance is but a congealed artifice and naivety vanished in black perhaps it is best if I were to stay in a state of nudity by remaining mushroom beige, allowing you alone to blush me your favorite shade of red [This message has been edited by Sunshine (06-10-2002 08:38 AM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sun, Might I say that these are some very very interesting colors you have given us... Like this write..very nice.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Sunshine! What a lovely array of colours you display your palette. ~Hugs~ |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
You really of wrung many colors out of a rainbow-full for this piece..bravo! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is gorgeous, Karilea... I can just see the brush, swirling the paint around, dressing you with color. Thanks for re-posting this for me.  ~artistic hugsLyra |
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bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
Perfectly positive verbal painting. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful .. and no furhter comment  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Good morning Sunshine! I believe you've just painted a vivid picture of yourself. Lovely! ~R.T. "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Palette perfect indeed....colors vivid and intense.....super! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a beautiful poem, Karilea. Thank you for reposting it. I didn't see it before. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms K, enjoyed it much, well done lady |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, You know you have two poems here. One is wishful and one is sad. You had a cloudy day.  |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sunshine Beautiful, rich words, lovely lady! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy...you saw... yes, indeed, the day I wrote this, I had a cloudy day... thanks, everyone, for reading... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari darling sister of my heart this is of course utterly utterly excellent. YES it is, and don’t argue you have such an amazing ability to write the colours of your soul. It’s as if you painted this with the colours of dreamers wishes mixed with a misty grey that seemed to have hidden the sun for just a heart’s beat. Utterly utterly perfect writing. It is an absolutely beautiful example of your incredible skill. I love it utterly Wonderful writing and so beautifully penned from a poetic pallet pen dipped in poets thought’s hue’s of butterfly. You do know I love this utterly utterly, of course you do you were always perspicacious and gracious of heart too. Others may not see it but I suspect they do. Shine one Sunshiny one   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Enjoyed the brush-strokes~ 'perhaps it is best if I were to stay in a state of nudity by remaining mushroom beige, allowing you alone to blush me your favorite shade of red' Enjoyed this thought in particular~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful, sounds like you are also an artist. Sandra |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karilea, Tell me again...who is nude?  It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Just the palette, Larry, just the palette... you folks are wonderful! |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
er, I would like to buy a copy of that painting...but, then , I suppose you are an original, right?  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Yes I think that she was indeed the canvas for this artwork, and you know what I could see the makeup, the dress, and all, but you are right...a happier, more wonderful place would be in the color nude, and being painted someone's favorite red or pink even .There is nothing means more to me than |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, you have painted a beautiful perfect picture of our wonderful Lyra! (big hugggssssss) This is pretty, sweet friend, she is a true angel as you are in poetry, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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