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Forgive me, love
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Forgive me, love |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Forgive me, love I have sinned. Ignorance is no defense nor idiocy though, both I own. Disappointment to perfection what else could I have been what else can I say save forgive me save me. The road to hell paved unintentionally and yes you warned me. Please don’t give up on us. I’ll try harder tomorrow. It’s no excuse I know but it’s the truth I am so very tired more flawed than you expected. I love you imperfectly with everything I am. Forgive me, love. Forgetting all I'm lacking |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*EXPLETIVE* I tried TWICE, TO LET YOU KNOW...sigh-longs.. y'touched me, as you often do... I read most all that you write, so I thank you. *hand-over-heart-hugs* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Don't we all...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ok, so I have no words... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Please don't give up on us. I'll try harder tomorrow. It's no excuse I know but it's the truth I am so very tired more flawed than you expected. I love you imperfectly with everything I am. Forgive me, love. =================================== not even "distilling" can lessen the ache and regret that bleeds down the page in this. pretty much takes all a moths words... lucky you...you get spared my ramblings.. I've yet to learn this art of distill, that you do so damn well. hugs D mothyme [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (06-10-2002 09:01 AM).] |
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bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
Kudo's from another imperfect male. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Duncan, you know this touches me deeply. Both a sad & beautiful write... Enjoyed, ~R.T. "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (06-10-2002 01:46 PM).] |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Duncan, no one is perfect. Everyone has flaws (even the ones who think they don't). I do hope you will be forgiven. Best wishes for you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan, You're just a member of the club. But you said it well. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I like that line..."I love you imperfectly" Truer words were never written! Exceptional plea for forgiveness in this write....very enjoyable!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Duncan "I loved you imperfectly"...tender, honestly..a winner in my book. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
'Tis better to have loved imperfectly than never at all, right? |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What a 1derful write. I enjoyed it immesely  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
*speechless* |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I am at a loss for words. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Love is never perfect, I suppose. But I bet you come close, so have faith. Sandra |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Oh I love it!!! Wow that is just awesome! Totally the way I feel a lot of the time!! Wow, that's great!! |
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MIdsummerRain Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175St. Louis, Missouri |
:::Replies by a soft, & understanding nod::: ~Rayne For in much wisdom is much grief |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I love you imperfectly with everything I am. and thats the best anyone can ever ask of you, Duncan... beautifully written  ~ imperfect hugsLyra |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Care for a duet? *smiles* ~R.T. "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
 Everything is possible in the game of life |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Duncan, none of us are perfect...Certainly not I....Yet, I have found that true love will forgive and accept...I hope you have this in your life... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Duncan, We've all made the speech but not likely as well done as yours. Thanks for not groveling. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
you have expressed magnificently what I so often unarticulate to myself thanks for the great poem BS. I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I'd forgive you and take you anytime but my "kitty" would get jealous. Spoken like a man that knows he is a man and in love. Well said. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thanks, Cowboy, for bumping this up. I still have no words... |
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Music Maker Member
since 2002-07-07
Posts 152THE ORIGINAL !!!! |
I stand in awe of a greater man than myself. With a more exposed heart than mine. With a compassion greater than mine. Who has more understanding of life itself. I am humbled. A beautiful use of words held together by their own gossamer web. Thank you - I have printed this one out for future use!!!!! Kind thoughts John |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
sigh...only word I can come up with Duncan. This is heartfelt and true...beautiful.. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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