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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-06-10 01:07 AM



Here I am in dance of field--
arms wide open spinning greed,
I beg to find the sky of me...
I beg to nullify my need.

© Copyright 2002 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-06-10 01:08 AM


That was short sweet and to the point.

Cold hands means a warm heart

wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)
2 posted 2002-06-10 01:10 AM


here i am to say hey!
Duncan
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3 posted 2002-06-10 01:28 AM


I could well use that shot right now. And then some. Sky, need, spinning...can we make this multiple choice?

Forgetting all I'm lacking
Completely and complete
I'll take your invitation
You take all of me

Lifehouse

Dark Angel
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4 posted 2002-06-10 01:40 AM


Hey Luscious...
these lines spoke to me....

I beg to find the sky of me...
I beg to nullify my need.

straight to he point hon
enjoyed.

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (06-10-2002 01:41 AM).]

Bridget Shenachie
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5 posted 2002-06-10 01:55 AM


Serenity--

Your lines really spoke to me. Ain't it awful to be human and less than perfect? I beg to rise above!

Shenachie

serenity blaze
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6 posted 2002-06-10 02:14 AM


smiling...especially at that last..yes..mortality...REALLY SUCKS.

(thus the principle of vampere?)

Oh, just shut up and kiss me!

*grin*

serenity blaze
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7 posted 2002-06-10 02:21 AM


and dunc? smiling...of course...

my window's open...

altho my options? be limited. *sigh*

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2002-06-10 02:30 AM


Enjoyed...James
Sunshine
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9 posted 2002-06-10 06:57 AM



Yes!

Janet Marie
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10 posted 2002-06-10 07:09 AM


I beg to nullify my need.
=============================

when ya learn how to do this? send vials......
*sigh*

bags123
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11 posted 2002-06-10 07:25 AM


I'll let you know If I agree with these sentiments by days end. LOL. Nice one.
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Deep in the heart
12 posted 2002-06-10 08:53 AM


Sometimes you just amaze me!
This is faulous ... and short; my favorite kind

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Nan
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13 posted 2002-06-10 09:06 AM


Just keep on dancin... Till the last dance is done.. Nicely said, serene one..
Tiersdin
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14 posted 2002-06-10 09:08 AM


Bravo!

*chuckles*
~R.T.

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

ethome
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15 posted 2002-06-10 09:11 AM


Here I am seasoned!!
Nice call!

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
16 posted 2002-06-10 09:28 AM


You said so much with so few words. This is lovely.
Dark Stranger
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17 posted 2002-06-10 09:44 AM


do the eyes search
or reach for what they have found

clever slice ms Serene

Seymour Tabin
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18 posted 2002-06-10 09:56 AM


serenity
An enticing open letter. Would I forty years younger. LOL Enjoyed

serenity blaze
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19 posted 2002-06-10 02:53 PM


Came back to thank you all for your kindness...and sy? you are SO sweet--

gotta love this place!

Skyfire
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20 posted 2002-06-10 09:58 PM


Thought-provoking.
vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
21 posted 2002-06-18 04:54 AM



serenity-
I'm loving this one!
Well said!
I'm with JM...when you figure it out, do share.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

ethome
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New Brunswick Canada
22 posted 2002-06-18 06:50 AM


Well ah just had ta read this won again.
Cause yore such a juicy sathern peach!
You can be greedy on ma ranch anytime dharlin!
Y'all don't be nullifyin nothin...ya heah!

bsquirrel
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23 posted 2002-06-20 12:49 PM


I like how you say nullify and not fulfill. Oh yes ah do.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Saunni
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West Virginia
24 posted 2002-06-20 01:19 AM


serenity, short but so cool! Love it!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

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