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Marc-Andre
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0 posted 2009-08-22 01:21 PM

as sun mars snow as scarecrows snore
a ram woos seven ewes or more
crows zoom on worms one mouse on roses
nuns murmur curses on worn noses
as seven asses run some races
a cow consumes rum - seven cases
as menace rouses men carouse
as women scream some vacuous vows
wrens on new vases coo anew
a mean son vacuums one more zoo
meow moo car vroom a war on ears
worn u.s.a  snares new careers
a sour mum curses new arrears
reveres sane cavemen cannoneers
a mare can mean a mere or mora
a mare aware can see aurora
a woman aura men camorra
comes one more summer on sonora
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1 posted 2009-08-22 04:07 PM

Marc, I am tranferring this to the poetry Challenge forum, since it is not a lesson, which the workshop is designed for. It IS an interesting piece...
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