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An Angel's Teardrop

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FallenAngelz
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0 posted 01-05-2009 08:05 PM       View Profile for FallenAngelz   Email FallenAngelz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for FallenAngelz

Another poem I wrote awhile back.


An angel's tear drop,
to bring an angel pain and sorrow,
gives the causer a life long curse within its soul.
a curse of never being forgiven.
Forgiven by the most gentle form of life.
An angel trying to hide its tears within the rain.
cursing the one that have given her so much pain.
Every time it rains,
you will remember of the angel that cried,
dropping its tears to the lands,
tears that has given the lands more life.
Rain that devours your soul,
with regret,
Till the sun sets,
you shall ease your soul
and hope you won't feel
the angel's tear drop.
As for the tears gives life to others,
It curses you by stealing life from you,
To live in pain and sadness,
and to lose more life
weakening your soul.
Trying to find the angel you have once hurt.
By following her tear drops.
So you may one day ask for her forgiveness
Hoping she would forgive you,
so you won't ever suffer from the curse of
an angel's tear drop.
qtangel812
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this is really good
very deep!!:]
 
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