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Ocean of Ending Life

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FallenAngelz
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since 01-05-2009
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0 posted 01-05-2009 08:03 PM       View Profile for FallenAngelz   Email FallenAngelz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for FallenAngelz

A poem I wrote awhile back, hope you enjoy it


I wish I could stop time,
So I can be with you for all eternity,
There must be a way,
To stop the flowing rivers of time,
From reaching the ocean of ending life,
Since time allows us to move on ahead,
I wish we can just stay where we are,
And be together forever,
Sometimes I look at time,
Seeing how time is the only thing
We can't escape
From our lives
I sometimes look at my past
Hoping to regain
On what has been lost,
To go back
To get back
Would mean to lose everything
That I have now
Time is like a river,
Steadily flowing by,
Carrying our dreams,
Memories,
And wishes
To the future
Death comes as time goes on,
If time stopped we would surely be
We would be together for sure...
Time cannot be stopped,
But if I was able to go back,
I would go all the way back to the day,
I was able to meet you,
So I can always spend even more time with you,
We are on the river of time...
Soon reaching the ocean...
Once we reach the ocean
Our lives would end,
Time keeps going on...
Till that day letís slow time...
So we can be together a bit longer
Now I am a bird... delaying time
So I will never reach the ocean of ending life.
Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 11-07-2002
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1 posted 01-11-2014 11:12 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Email Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Keeping a hold on time is almost as hard as skitching on the bumper of a '64 GTO over  speed bumps!

All jokes aside, your poetry hits home for lovers everywhere. If time were obedient though, would we value each other as much? The two in the garden had each other forever in perfect health, but it wasn't enough.  

...just bein' Bluesy

 
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