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Poetry Challenge!

A Heart's Lullaby

FallenAngelz
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since 2009-01-05

Posts 7

0 posted 2009-01-05 08:01 PM

Just a poem I thought up of and wanted to share!

A heart's lullaby to an eternal end,
Tales of the past are always retold,
Memories Of this one's old broken heart,
Shall continue to scar to the end
Of the life of this one's poor heart,
A heart's lullaby...
That is giving life...
Its melodies are always to be held sacred,
Since its sad stories... are no longer to legends.
Its melodies shall always be remembered even after the end
A hearts lullaby that will always continue to scar,
Of those once held close ones,
As punishment for not keeping its love,
To know you will hear its last lullaby,
Brings utmost sadness to one's heart,
Bringing tears as this last lullaby will be painfully
Heard one last time and to bring its final pain to others,
When this lullaby is over... the heart dies... and its memories
That were once held dear would be finally never be told again,
Melodies from the singing beauty will not be heard of no more,
The once heard songs of someone's past will now truly become a legend

Hope you enjoy it ^-^

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2009-01-19 10:07 AM

Wow I really enjoyed this poem!! Its really great! Since I can sorta connect with it. But honestly Dear, This forum is for creating challenges. If you wish to post poems and expect critic's and opinions there are plenty of other forums meant for that.

Hope to read more of your work.

With care,
-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

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