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xsaamaanthaax
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0 posted 12-04-2008 01:39 AM       View Profile for xsaamaanthaax   Email xsaamaanthaax   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for xsaamaanthaax


I'v lost the love of my life. I can't really think of the words to say to write some poetry. Any one who has experienced lossing their love, Feel free to share and post your poetry. Much appreciated. Alot.
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1 posted 12-04-2008 05:08 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

It All Happen By The Sea.

I'm lost in my memories
From way back then
We were two fools in love.
What more could it been?

Our love was unboundable
We were tight as can be
Until we went on a date
By the cold, dark sea

The waves were crashing
as the stars shown above
Until you looked into my eyes and said.
"Your not my love"

My heart broken in two
And torn apart.
I never wanted this to happen
But you just stole my heart.

I'm older now.
And time has gone by
I'm done with you
To know your just a lie.

I'll try to hold on.
Cause I know deep inside.
That i truly love you
But it'll have to hide.

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So yeah I dug this up from the abyss of the Piptalk library. lol. Hope you liked it.

-Zach

I'D RATHER BE ANYTHING BUT ORDINARY!!!! XP

xsaamaanthaax
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wow, that was awesome. thank you. Your words are very amazing .
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