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The Great Onion
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since 2008-06-05
Posts 40


0 posted 2008-06-09 09:36 PM


As The Shadow in Blue makes up his ways to challenge poets, i have decided to make up mine. im holding a contest to see who is the most effective poet.

im holding a contest here to see who has the best poem on philosophy. the contest closes this friday
and i will be determining which people will move on the second round, simply copy and paste your poems on this thread and hope for the best. Good Luck!

P.S.

ROUND 1: 5 possible winners

ROUND 2: 2 possible winners

ROUND 3: the champion shall arise


I will also find different topics for you people to write the poem about after the previous round finishes. Good Luck and Have Fun!

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Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
1 posted 2008-06-11 11:22 PM


OK Mr Onion I've gone through my folders and I think I've found a good one so read on and be (not so) amazed!


Half Truth

The truth is a wonderful thing
And simple truths abound
But in a life with shades of grey
There’s one thing I have found

The truth I tell is the one I know
The half truth of my mind
Half again in my expression
Me my friends will never find

Read my poems; They lie less than I
But they twist their explanations
Which just then goes to show
That life breeds simple confusions.

I am a man who feels true joy
And that there is the truth
I know a friend who knows to laugh
So true in the pained youth

But true joy masks true sorrow
A paradox for sure
Laughter true can be unfelt
And peace be marred by love

When I look into your eyes
Do I see the light of years?
Or only of a moment?
A joke on willing ears

This is all that there is
For us mortals bound
A game with pieces never seen
While words fly round and round

Now I tell another lie
A half truth will deceive
Although of that mine intentions
Never could conceive

The truth is a wonderful thing
And simple truths abound
But in my life, in shades of grey
This is all I’ve found

Only the insane are strong enough to prosper...
Only those who prosper can truly judge what is sane.

The Great Onion
Junior Member
since 2008-06-05
Posts 40

2 posted 2008-06-15 12:38 PM


lol since you're the only person that attended this, your the winner!
Earl Robertson
Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
3 posted 2008-06-19 12:39 PM


ROFL


(do I hear a crickt in the backround?)

There's a fine line between Genius and Insanity
I have Erased that Line
-Mark Paron

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