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The Shadow in Blue
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0 posted 05-31-2008 08:07 PM       View Profile for The Shadow in Blue   Email The Shadow in Blue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit The Shadow in Blue's Home Page   View IP for The Shadow in Blue

As a sort of introduction I challenge any takers to decribe their personality in whatever form they chose.

~Jill

JNS

"I celebrate myself, and sing myself,
And what I assume you shall assume,
For every atom belonging to me as good belongs to you."-WW

Falling rain
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1 posted 06-03-2008 02:17 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Wow this is a challenge.. I'll have to get back to you on this... cause its gunna take me a while to write out my personallity lol  


"It might be easy to fall for someone but it's also easy to break a heart." - Zach Booker.

The Great Onion
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2 posted 06-09-2008 01:35 AM       View Profile for The Great Onion   Email The Great Onion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Great Onion

I made this poem in less than 10 minutes without much thinking. its funny how random things pop out of your head lol.
shy

the color of the sky is shy

when i look up it's shy

however i dont know why

that a person like me is shy
i am never shy

when someone stares me into the eye

i am never shy

when people want me to fly

i am never shy

when someone tells me to throw a cherry pie

i am never shy

when the class play goes awry

i am never shy

when someone tells me to punch a guy (which I never do).


however when the 8th grade culmination comes, i know when i am shy

and please don't ask me why.

The Great Onion
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3 posted 06-09-2008 01:37 AM       View Profile for The Great Onion   Email The Great Onion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Great Onion

sorry for taking up space. but there was a couple of spacing problems, this is the final format.

shy

the color of the sky is shy

when i look up it's shy

however i dont know why

that a person like me is shy

i am never shy

when someone stares me into the eye

i am never shy

when people want me to fly

i am never shy

when someone tells me to throw a cherry pie

i am never shy

when the class play goes awry

i am never shy

when someone tells me to punch a guy (which I never do).


however when the 8th grade culmination comes, i know when i am shy

and please don't ask me why.
The Great Onion
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4 posted 06-09-2008 01:40 AM       View Profile for The Great Onion   Email The Great Onion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Great Onion

OMG!!! i am very sorry, accidentally posted it twice. anyways, this one is centered; it kinda gives it more feeling.

shy

the color of the sky is shy

when i look up it's shy

however i dont know why

that a person like me is shy

i am never shy

when someone stares me into the eye

i am never shy

when people want me to fly

i am never shy

when someone tells me to throw a cherry pie

i am never shy

when the class play goes awry

i am never shy

when someone tells me to punch a guy (which I never do).


however when the 8th grade culmination comes, i know when i am shy

and please don't ask me why.
The Shadow in Blue
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5 posted 06-09-2008 08:35 AM       View Profile for The Shadow in Blue   Email The Shadow in Blue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit The Shadow in Blue's Home Page   View IP for The Shadow in Blue

That's no problem Great Onion, but for forture reference you can always edit your post as long as it is within the same day.

The repetition of "I am never shy" works well for your poem.

~Jill

[This message has been edited by The Shadow in Blue (06-09-2008 12:32 PM).]

Bob K
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Dear Falling Rain,

                       Whatever else you come up with, it will be hard put to beat, for the sheer joy of discovering it, the line that you already posted.  What a one line personality description!  There are fiction writers who would give an arm to have written that, and your unconscious simply coughed it up on the spot.  Your unconscious is very fast and very funny and very sharp, and it works very well with your shyness and uncertainty.  Keep writing, guy.

Yours, BobK
The Great Onion
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7 posted 06-09-2008 09:55 PM       View Profile for The Great Onion   Email The Great Onion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Great Onion

im glad you liked my poem. not to change the
topic of this thread or anything, but has anyone here recieved a high merit in a poetry contest before? i had a high merit attending the Fall Great Lakes competition and guess what; my name and my poem were published in a book! (though it was quite a while ago, i think it was a year before, and i will try to make it to the top poem list of Montana, Wisconsin and Michigan.) though ironically, i live in California :/
Falling rain
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8 posted 06-16-2008 01:23 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Oh why thank you BobK.. I wasn't uncertaint where to start LOL.. theres to many words to discribe one personality.. And I don't even know all of them.. but thanks for the complement!

Oh and Shadow and Blue.. I'm still writing out this poem!! lol .. this is gunna take awhile.. lol


"It might be easy to fall for someone but it's also easy to break a heart." - Zach Booker.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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9 posted 07-15-2008 09:34 AM       View Profile for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed

Personality (7/15/08)

She’s the stranger that you look for
In the crowd you never knew
The socialite that brings you
A hard catch 22

She’s the luckiest unlucky
Child you’ll ever meet
This talkative inventor
That formulates the beat

She’s bubbly and funny
A bit insane at times
But more than just that
She’s a creator of rhymes

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

 
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