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Assassin_of_Verse Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 330that So Cal |
Okay...Time for me to stretch my legs and try something new! I promised hunnie_girl that I would post a challenge! Okay, here goes! The poem must have the phrase: "grins of severed words" Here's mine: The frowns of captive words betrayed the stench of bitter thoughts delayed. Soon these thoughts began to swell and take up the place where bad thoughts dwell. This akward bubble continued its quest and sought out a light far, far west. And lo and behold! The captor could hear his own desperate thoughts, in his own left ear. Quite alarmed by the voices he heard, he quickly grabbed paper and freed each word. The grins of severed words exclaimed the songs of laughing thoughts unchained. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
AoV, Interesting phrase and poem. I'll take a whack at it in open, thanks. Doc |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
The grins of severed words... what does that even mean.. I will try it as soon as I get past the confusing stuff:P |
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Elias Nevermore Member
since 2007-11-03
Posts 152 |
The millions of ashes spread across the sky cover up the horizon, as another day dies. Little children arise out of the bunkers, in search of a light that has been lost forever. Each gasp of air they take leads them closer to the end as radiation consumes them, turning them into ash. They died from brutality because man forgot its own humanity, and for those who cause the pain the grins of severed words remain. |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
In answer to hunnie girl and a compliment to our gratious assasin and all those who have come before. Spinning like a spiders web Spinning like a spiders web My words go subtly round The dark secluded corners know The secrets of the ground What is our condemnation It is as our cities walled Defended by gorillas Forever cruelly sound Here is our poetry The prose of simple slang The bells of defeat they rang Signaling these lovers pains These are the grins of severed words Our Twisted sense of power The subtlety of word and deed Delay the reckoning hour "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl "Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl (Yes I am crazy) |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Casting frowns sorround his mind. Grining with there tasteful smile. Spin they're web of hate Cut the cord. Life is lost. Left with the grins of severd words. Still attached to his mind Tortured by they're smile Tortured by they're words Never to escape. --------------------------------------- I just wrote this. Well i didn't write it i typed it. But yeah hope you guys like! ~Zach~ ~Zach~ |
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poetrywriters.net New Member
since 2008-04-25
Posts 3 |
I also wonder what the line you must use in the poem means, it is very very abstract. --------------- www.Poetrywriters.net - forum for poets. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
all that you feel is the bitterness in your head all that was done all that was said Left with the grins of severd words. almost too silent for anyone to hear ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` ahhhhhh so this was actually the werst and hardest thing i've ever had to write!!!!!!!! haha tx Andrew for a good brain twister Krysti |
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